I love how quick pace the story is gulped up with the actions and the family bond. I can't wait to know more about this mysterious world you threw me into. Plus, your endings leave me hanging and I want the next chapter. Don't stop! I can't wait for more. -ALLtheRageSAGE

This is my favorite chapter out of all of them! Its so funny

Wickedly good story theme. I can't wait to see whats next. Also, how the character develops and learns about the strange world ahead.