Oh **** off! Everyone's allowed their own opinion, and not like I hate the whole story or anything (left it few months ago when caught up available free stuff at Marvel with Tony Court scene) Doesn't mean have to like it when it when Nil takes it a level of asshole too far & does some shitty crap

LOL what the HELL is up with her Divine Golems!!! Seriously a pinky! What the hell happened to them being on Max & her going for Hr! - though guess it was mistake on her part saying "once" then go (plus quick escape via use flirt Vivi), but still, you'd think with those Droids she last a little longer! LOL

LOL since when does "fertility" equate "love" or even s*exual capability?? Having high sper.m count doesnt equal "love" & mean same thing eg be it on thier own when jack or when with girl etc (and fails really fast too lol) :P And gods must have insane se.x (inc bodies+PWRs etc) or otherwise this is starting to look bad!! It wasnt just Tanya going that long too, nor only high level mortal in world, and its not like there's a "blood flow - tire" issue when using a rod LOL

[ ... was the only one able to make Tanya leak. ... "Tanya is just a bit annoyed that you actually managed to make her come~ " ] I hope author meant "sq.uirt", cause thats just plain sad if after all 'that' (plus Penny's EXP also etc) she only came once the entire night!! Same thing for Yuri. There's a difference between the two; noticeably one having said pos mistaking for pe.eing like Yuri thought lol :P

One - she brought this entirely on herself with her flirting, allowing Droids run amok, accepting these types of situations, and her religion too. TWO - *sigh* why we have to have so many random girls just plopped in as background nonsense that has no point. 100s!! Why? And this Mary Sueing & brainwashing affect is going way too far THREE - seriously stop being a "winy b.it.ch" about having a harem. YOU MADE IT dumba*s! What happened to oh so amazing in Bed Tane/Tanya that you can't handle more than one person (even if add some have Lvl B.S. stuff)- its called making it a team effort & having everyone be intimate with each other; less "work" for you (seriously? Work?), more enjoyment overall, and foster deeper bonds between harem members. Its funny with this occasionally jokey mentioned, but really does get too much. Its simmilar to a rich dude burning cash for firewood etc, whilst ccomplaining he has too much money blah blah LOL

I know right !!! It was so dam annoying reading this arc with these bloody names!!! LOL I mean if your going end up altering or plain up changing character personalities, looks etc, you may as well do the names!

Why does ANYONE at this point think she bullies Yuri?? Its been more than half a year since the start of school & plenty of time for people to see & hear that is CLEARLY not the case at all, let alone the fact she's a fanatic "fangirl" for Tanya

Didnt Penny already have one? It even had reproduction option- I guess this was a better model?? Same with Diane, thou dont know about reproduction part And again, really hope none (but crazy Yuri maybe; with her messy understanding of things) are seriously thinking of having kids right of the bat!!! Literal ZERO risk of unwanted preg for all them --- [if use strap-on just use 'norm' magic ver. or set "off" on repro ver.] --- so have plenty time get to that! Not like any of them are at the end of a BIO ticking time bomb yet, esp if can be younger for longer in this world.

LOL just be up front & train them; dont pull stupid stunts like this *facepalm*

Names get all mixed up & confusing when it gets to Bit about Penny & if Tanya "loves" her

Penny (prob)

They just made the point of needing (unknown) magic for FxF kids or use the Mana-Tool, so I dont get the point of no "child bearing" till graduation??? So them doing it has Zero risks of kids, and with whole increased age-limit & longer youth, not like Pen or Rose have or should be 'desperate' for kids? Honestly with tools Dreams made us aware of, and really more realistic aspect ignored most fantasy works, they surely have some thing like birth control ====================================== Whats confusing is Gay marriage & Poly is accepted, women are acknowledged & allowed learn same skills as men; showing can be equal or better than guys, YET they keep aspect of women cant normally inherit? Really doesnt make much sense. Hopefully also no more plain 2d stupid male characters; they're f'king raised nobels, and when you add the ages given here, their actions make ZERO sense at all - esp. when in public

[Bestiary] - Got your West & East mixed up in description ie. the East Rijin are called "West" when describe wind & bodies, and West strong Drac-Centaur are called "East" Sad & weird (with fantasy ignore species probs), after seeing huge variety with Merfolk & other diff race hybrids, that they seem rare with Dungeon Centaurs - atleast noticeable enough be classed differently - after so many 100s yrs. Worse that they're infertile :( I'd expect some also with 2 Drac types, but these might be unnoticeable; my theory Yinglong prob was Hybrid hence bulk & not orbs at first.

# Thought so with Dungeons, as it was mentioned as related to system, & plusable theories on existence meant to be used to strengthen & provide resources to mortals - thou does make it interesting in that there were def less options on ranking up with Demi-Gods & Gods because of this back in Old Genesis # I think you mean Evan :P - Haha even after every thing Evan, still got lil that feminie look (Not that IMO thats bad thing) :P. Of course it's up to Ami etc, but considering she's the Alpha in that relationship, I have feeling Evan is more likely to go with the flow in this case LOL Also got a scary Mama Fairy in background if causes to much probs for her adorable girl Haha ================ # Yeah- Timeline's a "little" messy. But thats expected when first writing story, not sure some things (yet), and no editor help etc. One Example- ** When Wyvern Overlord was Sealed- should been long time ago, but alot of references (esp early on), jump around making it out to be recent & then later alot longer; latest chaps place it at around 300 yrs with Sol & co. going into Forsaken Lab after -- Just seems not long enough (just IMO; fantasy lore/History feel in story & general) at 300 yrs considering timing of other events, but thats better than some points it's implied seem less than this messing with stuff like Merfolk Sacrifices. Also weird Belle acted Wyvern was myth told by Dad when they can live so long & before "sleep" was less than 136 yrs prior when told (Eaten 164 yrs ago). Also his "quest & reign" would covered many years of history, plus be documented. Question- Grand Forest Shrine Spirits - at what point were these shrines built & spirits worshipped in, then later sealed & they corrupted (affect land b4 &/or after)? Plus Dark Nation creation aka Kingdom downfall

LOL id thought she was shifting it away; as non of the kids this or last time raised any Qs over her suddenly having it here & in the other hotspring lol And hopefully the wives dont start ignoring her "lower lips" - what about her nectar & the new possibilities (eg Nes, Nix & Rim etc) it presents whilst her "rod" is occupied !?! ;P LOL haha

Cool, nice info :D - I guess OVA took her time other those thousands years LOL - I guess Kelpie were lot later for Morp if only been in dungeon for 100s years & Mum was sis of Old As*hole Merman so be back in that timeframe- I'd would have hoped he wasnt just stupid & put ALL Kelpie, Sphinx & Drac in there - got whole world buddy! LOL - Thou pos they gone extinct, like many other races, in outside - certainly seems ppl had some info on they're existence Thought be a few more 100 thousand atleast from way Rock & Sand God put it with how old his Dungeon was, and him being 1 million yrs old (pretty sure said this). Dont know thou if dungeons in some form were a thing before split; so couldd have created it back then I suppose ======================== Im gonna guess going hold true all, well alot, of her Kids being Bi- Im calling Geraldine x Amphi as being likely ;P lol

OKAY - Shape shift those ugly balls away RIGHT AWAY !! LOL :P No need for bad Futa here!- plus they just get in the way of her virg*na too lol :P Not like with her it stop her being able produce seed. Also hope outside bedroom time she shifts this (pen*s) away too; no need for our Vampy girl have that outside of then IMO :P lol WHICH by the way, with all her powers, there's NO WAY she would not be able to control & stop creating sperm or getting self pregnant. Insane if with all she can do if she cant do that! PLUS waaaaay too many kids!!! Got 100s of years & more of time, raising & letting them grow up properly- no need turn into a production factory. **. Need get onto creating Birth Control for Empire etc, or going hsve same prob Azuma with out of control population problems, let alone just want some intimacy without constant kids. If already insane alchemy, magitech, spells arent aleady enough- u got your blood & milk they've already made super improved stuff with, including viagra LOL

Hmmm I would think he would be Bi then, if not for sudden way info about girls in empire now opresented here (thou doesnt exclude it still)- thou I guess this doesnt include his family as he's shown being fine & pretty attached all wives etc. Also B4 it all just seemed as part of his shy nature etc Reason I say "Bi" is because it did seem he was being affected by girls but shy/intimidated, & the physical contact in bathing with, being rubbed by & sleeping on boobs with our Vamp Fairy - not in awarked & neg way as Ryo, but rather embarrased & enjoying it etc (funny enough, Ms. Lust also seeming to "enjoy" it too, descriptions of her reasctions to cutness, & 'teased' him have his way with her breasts etc lol) ================= So did Morph just live INSANE amount of time &/or keep doing it as a Demi-God?? Or Centaurs came very late to Vida, as its meant to have existed for 100s of thousands of years, close to Million it seems- putting together all info said so far. Thou numbers can tend to shift all over the place in the story

So she makes the 2nd Sin of Greed; after the prevous Demon Slime ("Reincarnated as Slime" Reference & Pos Rimuru past self she reincarnated as a summon from??)

a-d-u-l-t = aka a grown-up. LOL WTF is with this !? :P