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Akia200

Akia200

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  • Akia200
    Akia20010mth
    Replied to astro_fy

    Thank you so much for the positive feedback

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    Deep In The Mud
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    Akia2002yr
    Replied to Lina_Z2007

    Thank you for your support

    "One lesson to learn kid, there is always someone better than you or more willing to do better" 
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  • Akia200
    Akia2002yr
    Replied to MelBri

    thank you so much for your support!!:):)

    Ch 22 TWENTY TWO
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    Akia2002yr
    Replied to peppermint101

    Thank you for the comment, the knowledge you seek is revealed if you read a little further.

    "l'm not going to bite, you can comfort me" she said sarcastically before the water works started again. This time l didn't hesitate put my arms around her. It took a while before l got the motion of it all. I went from awkwardly patting her back to fill on rubbing soothing circles 
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  • Akia200
    Akia2002yr
    Replied to yammani23

    Thank you for the feedback. My goal has always been to create something that people can connect to but to also elicit different emotions out of them. Thank you for the support❤️

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  • Akia200
    Akia2002yr
    Replied to Purplebride

    No apologies needed. Thank you for your honesty. I love it when my readers give me feedback both positive and negative because that's the only way l can become a better writer. Thank you for the support

    Ch 1 CHAPTER ONE
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  • Akia200
    Akia2002yr
    Replied to Purplebride

    Us too but hopefully for them it will end in love and success. Thank you for the support ❤️

    Never having experienced love first hand, never having kissed a guy, the only guy l ever hugged being Keira's ex-boyfriend, never been on a date, never having been the first or even last choice. My romantic life has always been non-existent. To a certain degree, at times l feel as though my hatred for love and relationships stems from the mere fact that l have never thought of myself as worthy to experience such feelings. I can easily blame it on the hardships many endure in relationships or the billion failed marriages always ending in divorce but the truth is l have convinced myself to believe that love is a centralised capitalist idea brought about to scam people out of their money. Nothing but a waste of time, money, feelings and energy and as they like to say 'it will end in tears'.
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Replied to _Ocelot_

    sometimes if l am on the road.....best thing l've seen all day.

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    Akia2003yr
    Replied to _6007

    Is that an error l need to fix?

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    Akia2003yr
    Replied to _Ocelot_

    🤣 🤣 🤣 Wee you in the next chapter 🙈. Thank you so much for the support ❤️

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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Replied to _Ocelot_

    Thank you for your feedback, l will ask someone to proofread my work because l am clearly failing in that department.

    Ch 47 FOURTY SEVEN (Unknown POV)
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Replied to PriscillaandEXO

    He really doesn't deserve her but she needs to learn gee worth as well

    "And being the stupid girl l am, l apologised and begged him not to break up with me." and with that she started crying again. 
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Posted

    I love love your writing style. The use of English to describe your surroundings and world background is such a breath of fresh air. Keep up the good work

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    Secrets of the Universe
    Fantasy · Purple_Khaos
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Posted

    Love love this book. Most female lead stories are always putting females in a misogynistic position. I like how you are changing the narrative and view point of females in the world. It's very encouraging to read. Keep up the good work

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    Tales of the Throne: Queen
    Fantasy · kariimia
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Posted

    The first chapter reminded me of all the great moments l had as a kid at my grandparents house and all thr folklores they told me. And that's one of the reasons why l like this book. It produces feelings of warmth and family. Top tier content. I am not one who usually likes reading stories from third person perspective but the say you write captivates the readers attention. And the flow(smooth) , there aren't jumps in the time line, do thank you for that. Keep up the good work

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    Our Mighty Crusaders
    Fantasy · DonDenis
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
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    I like how the first chapter somewhat portrays how a determined woman acts (although not all of them use men) but minji knows what she wants but doesn't mind stepping on a few heads to get it. It's a somewhat accurate description of how society is when a insecure man gets involved with a beautiful woman. I like. Can't wait to see how this book progresses

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    Still Working on the title
    Urban · SomethingLikeDeSun
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
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    This book is a prime example (for me personally) especially from the first two chapters of how as people we take advantage of all the privileges given to us. Thank you for reminding me to be a better person and to look out for other who are in disadvantaged situations

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    At Last I Found You In My World
    Urban · Faysal_Ahmed_5058
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
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    I will be honest, l am not really a fan of the whole dark, lucifer type of scene/story. If l was, l would have enjoyed it cause it has a good plot. The story has got potential l will give you that.

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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
    Replied to _lexa

    I am so glad that my novel is allowing you to reminisce beautiful memories. Thank you for the support and the love, you have no idea how much it means to me. Stay blessed

    Ch 2 CHAPTER TWO
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  • Akia200
    Akia2003yr
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    I'm so glad l stumbled upon this book. I have never read anything like it. I love how dedicated you are to your craft. You update regularly feeding our curious minds. I don't always understand the terms you use but nonetheless your book is amazing. You have a lot of potential and l can't wait to see how your book progresses.

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    木水中水廿水
    Fantasy · Purple_Khaos
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