Love the story line but some things are so Repetitive and takes too long to get to the point
Some times focus on Other characters is good but when it goes in too long it detracts from the main characters
Took a while to end but glad all gad happy endings
Happy to have read the book
This was my firsr web novel to start reading so just a little emotional that it has ended
Love the female lead She has a Great personality! I like the fact that there isnt unnecessary Details but enough information to keep reader intrigued in the current story line and hopeful foR the reat of the stoRy to unfold with little hints
Great flow of the story. Chapters are just right in content and length. Like the back stories provided. Leaves just the right amount of suspense to Look forward to next chapters
I enjoy this but feel there may be a little Too many sub characters Sad that Lu Yemings character changed I prefer him as the doting brother not some psycho