yes, I will

This book is fast pace, so unfortunately no slow-burn romance...

Hello, sorry for late reply, since I upload this story in mirror site sharestory.io there are no settings for that, but FYI this book is intended for mature audience 18+ Thank you!

Hello all, I will using this review section to shamelessly inform you that this book has completed. Please wait patiently for the next sequel because I am not a machine. I need to design the story plot better to give the most satisfaction ending as possible. Thank you!

Thank you!

thank you

I love how you open your chapter with a death sentence, the book cover tells a story about what's the book all about (which is nice). There's a view grammatical error but it's normal. overall, LOVE it!

nice opening chapter, however, there's a view grammatical errors. But I am hooked.

the king's eye didn't what? this is incomplete sentence.

thank you dear

thank you, I love your book too!

I love how the author made a unique fantasy world and land of Dura is a name that I easily could remember. I still don't understand what's so important about the dragon token and why everyone wants to get their hands on it. but that's probably that will hook most readers. the book is well written, the action scene is written well, so I can imagine what is happening, the characters also unique.

I can't imagine a man is wearing a corset, so I think your world is purely fantasy like game like fantasy

I love main character with whip as a weapon, most authors used sword

please delete the repetitive :D

I don't mind an opening begins with an action scenes, but this was a little bit too long, which make the phase a little bit slower. But overall, the grammar is perfect, the story was unique and interesting, and as an MMORPG player, necromancer is my favorite hero.

I don't mind an opening begins with an action scenes, but this was a little bit too long, which make the phase a little bit slower. But overall, the grammar is perfect, the story was unique and interesting, and as an MMORPG player, necromancer is my favorite hero.

The background is good, the skill on how the author describe his/her fantasy world is extremely well. The grammar is also quite good, the story development begins from simple to more complex universe.

love the 1st chapter

are you trying to make me as a slave?