I thought she would gift gim a reD nightie, then i thought she would gift him herself. but its something moving in a bag after they went hunting... a rabbit? Lol

Misha do u have someone who helps u edit? Occasionally i spot an error but i dont want it to seem like i am nitpicking and leaving coments about Everything i see. i feel it would distract from rhe book. is there a way to get this i formation to you another way?

Agh! Such a short chapter. and those conditions are rediculous. if dawn loses even one round she risks dying. And for her to win every round is a bit over the top. however this story has me hangi g on for the next chapter to be released

You said Gayle Wyatt it should be Silver

R there more chapters yet

How long has it been since a new chapter was released.

And y hasnt she used her magic

So frustrating having to wait each day for a fastpass.