Daiki154
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Daiki1542yrCommentedpersonalmente, me gusto, pero estuvo corto el capitulo...
Admittedly, I don't think this is one of my best chapters. I think my next one is much better, but that could just be my biased opinion. I'll give it another look over in the morning after I cleared my head and had a good nights sleep.- Daiki1542yrCommented
solo puedo decir que el capitulo estuvo, Magnifique!!!
Mc pops up infront of Salem, wields magic and shamelessly flirts, Salem becomes the confused. - Daiki1542yrCommented
hahahaha... no me esperaba eso
I took out the giant purple dildo and threw it, smacking him in the face. It fell to the ground as he blinked. "Okay, I'll give you that one." - Daiki1542yrCommented
Gracias por el capitulo, estubo epico.
"Does it matter? For now, it's something for you to work towards." I wonder how far you'll go if you have something beyond your reach to constantly strive for. Let's see if he can break through these limits and actually approach me in the future. - Daiki1542yrCommented
I know about the cover, but... I'll see it this way.
I decided to look around. As I looked to my left I saw a bathroom and decided to enter. Upon entering I saw a massive mirror. What reflected off the mirror was a naked young boy with white silky hair and eyelashes that reflected the light looking like snow, beautiful chocolate skin, and golden eyes. I was around 5'11, not bad height for a 15 year old kid. My shaft was pretty lengthy too, around 10 inches. - Daiki1543yrCommented
soy del tipo que prefiere em los MC el cliche de parase que tiene el cuerpo de un debilucho cuando lo ven de cerca asi que pondre una inagen del Cloud Anime que me gusto
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vaya, que loco
[???]: It's over 1000. - Daiki1543yrReplied to krikot
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"Kagura, i'll teach you don't mind your stupid Papa." Irene said but Kagura shook her head as she looked up and stared at her father's eyes. She felt frightened and almost hesitated but she bit her lower lip and shouted her answer. - Daiki1543yrCommented
both.
Should I swap to 3rd person or continue using 1st person? I thought of using 3rd person, although uncomfortable to me, to train myself. Let me know your thoughts if I should continue using 1st person or switch to 3rd person. I'm letting y'all know I'm new to 3rd person perspective so mistakes will pop up in this chapter. This chapter will be on 3rd person, just letting y'all know. - Daiki1543yrCommented
que abusivo... jajaja
My whole body was hot, and I felt butterflies in my stomach. I know that I'm fighting a five-year-old, but it's a fight nonetheless. - Daiki1543yrReplied to MaloThe_Marshall
- Daiki1543yrCommented
estobe en el autobus y al leer esto no pude evitar reime furte, gracias autor, ahora me libre del estres de la vida
'....Oh shît! don't tell me that he is one of them. the people who like to get NTR, what is wrong with this village, is everyone here a pervert?'