Great work. I'm a fan. I read this twice by the way. You can say I spent a lot of time reading through your work. Take a break have some fun, and than explore the other options you opened up with all the other characters. Han Sen could be a side character in someone else's story. Zero. His kids. Baoer and her destiny. lots more to explore. im pretty sure since you have such imagination, you would have no problem working on developing the Rest of the mysterious characters that still keep us wanting more of your work.

that's funny