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Yea, but it would be boring writing another "sign up at the guild" scene so I skipped it. Just assume it happened in the background.

To my understanding they only give up the ghost when there mana stone is hit.

Yea I had a few similar ideas, depending on a few things, like his magic for example. Which I have already decided on, just trying to think of how to yoink the grimoire from Bell.

I will, have no doubt. Just not right now.

This really is just a start, nothing serious hand holding~ at most, and even that might be too lewd.

Well let me say this, in my admittedly very limited romantic experience things don't progress in a set pattern or in a "perfect" way. love is messy, romance is messy it is a jumble of sudden feelings and uncontrolled words. If you want a "perfect" romance go else were this will not be it, they will be awkward and maybe jump a few steps, maybe back step a few more.

If it was me, I would as well, but I needed an excuse for Leo to progress a lot and plot convenience is the downfall of all logic.

Yep, cool show

Sure, but it doesn't change much, and this is a fan fic, also it's only the goblins.

I haven't fully decided but I'm thinking of keeping it like this in the future, maybe get him a pair of gauntlets or gloves for style points.

Shush... that's for... later

....maybe.

Neither did they do anything, and wont for a bit, little things like this here and there will happen though. You should know that Hestia is a highly affectionate person especially with Bell, Mc in this fic takes Bells place by "rescuing" her first, so in my mind quickly developing feelings make since for Hestia. Rest assured though nothing too serious will happen between them for a little bit longer, just physical contact/affection like in cannon.

Fully agree on the two points you noted, as for the paragraph spacing, I think I got what you mean and in the chapter I post tomorrow I'll attempt to do that, so let me know if it's any good.

Thanks! I was confused as to why the extra spaces I was putting in weren't translating over to the posted chapter.

I'll try to keep it to that schedule, but I have some stuff Irl that might interfere now and then.

Don't know haven't thought about that honestly, killing or rather possibly killing a god is a little farther along in the story than I've planned yet.

Any who have mind/magic people, monsters, the skill don't care.