Nice story thus far. Keep it up.

Thanks for the chapter

Author, your taste in books is immaculate. That series was absolutely amazing.

Yeah, Webnovel seems to make bad decision after bad decision.

The main character won’t become more powerful than the main cast only at the end of the novel right? That’d be a bit disappointing. Only reason I’m asking is because I’ve read one too many novels where this happens when the mc travels with the main cast.

Very realistic and enjoyable novel, looking forward to reading more and seeing Thomas get the right mindset needed for the type of world that he’s in.

Depends on what Superman we’re talking about, some versions of him tank universal level attacks on the daily. And Abbeloth is nowhere near universal level.

Depends on what Superman we’re talking about, some versions of him tank universal level attacks on the daily. And Abbeloth is nowhere near universal level.

Good book so far, the idea behind it is original which is something rare to behold on this app. Keep up the good work.

I understand where you are coming from, but I must disagree with that statement. Support and/or hate on a book can make or break it.

Smiting*

Was half a second from dropping the novel not gonna lie, but this one paragraph here just saved it. If the author reads this, keep in mind that people don’t want to read a FanFiction where the main character is constantly giving everything away instead of focusing on himself and his familia, the focus is no longer on the main character at that point and he becomes akin to a side character.

Yeah, he’s an idiot. Dropping this hot garbage trash bin of a book, shame.

Called it, as soon as he said he was looking for someone to command his armies instead of Esdeath and Danzo, I knew he was going for Lelouch. Smart decision Mr. Author

She’s not a “loli”, she’s a child. Always a bad sign when chinese novels refer to children as lolis.

There is going to be no NTR in this story., am I correct in this asssumption Mr. Author?

Nvm, it only has a 4.8 due to some idiots spamming 5 star reviews.

Worst power progression I’ve ever seen, mc becomes a captain by the age of 15 WITHOUT his grimoire and then after 7 years is still the same strength, the other captains and his own students are as strong as him. Makes a captain kneel by only using mana but can barely defeat any of them in a battle. Some random spy is stronger than him in a lot of instances even though she uses sound magic against his space magic, which is like mud magic against Julius Novachronos time magic, completely impossible to win. Grammar is terrible, readable but mistakes literally every sentence, not to mention the author adds the most random things in sentences out of nowhere. The only good thing about this book is the steady chapters coming out, it’s not surprising to me that his other book only has a 3.8 rating. How this has a 4.8 rating baffles me.

Great story so far, good grammar, and an original concept when it comes to the powers chosen. Only thing I would change is the spacing bewteen sentences, dont know if it’s just me but when you put a ton of sentences together to form these long paragraphs, I tend to get easily distracted and not very interested in reading all of what’s there. Maybe put 2-4 sentences together then space them out, overall great story.