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The author needs to show, not tell the story, it brings the reader in. I feel like an outsider being told about something, I want to feel for the characters.
Glad to know the chapters will be longer
Chapters are too short.
I like the addition of a new character.
I would have liked to see the exchange between Abi and Mr Black Leather Jacket in the car on the way to the party.