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L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

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2020-09-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_8mth
    Replied to tho2

    North Korea is nothing like the Scandinavian countries. I don't think you can compare socialism with them.

    Hunters from the United Federation lead vastly different lives, but from what I've seen in online forums they're happy with the way things work. Of course, there are still many issues, but nowhere near as horrid as all our news networks make it out to be. Even the good things you see online could also be a false depiction though. So I guess I'd have to visit there myself to see how things are in the future
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Video Games · Adui
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to JoSauer

    I'm in the learning phase, so I highly appreciate every piece of criticism my story gets.

    He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to JoSauer

    Noted. Thanks for the comments, i will sit down to change and edit the story at one point, and your comments are very helpful. Thanks 😊

    He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to JoSauer

    yes, vit and int determines how much you have, not levels

    Health: 65 — Mana: 100
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to JoSauer

    Not sure what you mean?

    Health: 65 — Mana: 100
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to JoSauer

    Should be said that the deadlock wasn't meant to be going on for minutes and only a few seconds. He go out of it since he could feel him losing the fight. Could have been explained better, and thanks I will take notes of every comment and improve the story :)

    He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to Liradel

    I have compressed the different windows so not to have it fill everything. And when he looked at the skill before, it was the skills detail window, its where the info of the skill is.

    Night Slash: Dark Type
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to Liradel

    The story got more developed as i wrote it, and this is one of the things i changed. My story will get an major update when i have enough material, but as it is now small errors will persists through the story.

    "It is! Nice!"
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_9mth
    Replied to Liradel

    its not romance tagged so don't expect it

    'I think I like him.'
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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)

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    Karma Of Vengeance
    Martial Arts · Saromaru
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    The plot is very unique, I never read anything like this before. The writing was decent, though first-person telling is not my cup of tea. Keep going and good work.

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    Eleanor And The Gods Of Olympus
    others · Darine_ALRAMMAH
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    Not much of any errors. The story and characters are very good, (of what I read). You are explaining everything in great detail and you really feel like you get to know everything about the world and its characters. Thanks, it's a great story!

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    White Lie.
    Fantasy Romance · Rivera722
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    Unique plot. The story is very well written, character and world development are at a good pace. There arent many grammatical errors either. Overall 5/5 keep going

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    No Love for the Wretched
    Historical Romance · Heather_Green672
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    The story is way more interesting than I thought when I went into it. Other than grammatical errors the story is very well writing and it's something you can be proud of author-san.

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    The Elusive Book Keeper
    Magical Realism · Dark_Scholars
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    The story is well writing. Everything is explained beautifully and you really feel immersed in the story. The pace and development are on point too. Definitely recommends!

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    Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate
    Fantasy Romance · MayDreamer
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Replied to MayDreamer

    i been sick the last week and still am. So i slept more than writing. But i will soon get back to writing 😁

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    Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
    Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    I'm not really good at reviewing things. But what I can say is, that the quality of the writing is very good. You go into great details about the world and characters which is very good. Not too much and not too little, the balance is on point.

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantasy Romance · Ice_Princesss
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    I usually avoid these types of stories, but when started reading it, I couldn't stop. First of all, the grammar, punctuations, etc are on point. (I'm not native, so I might not be the best judge). But overall was it a smooth read. Second, the story and characters are well written and you really get sucked into the world the author made. Though, sometimes I lost a bit of interest in the world and characters when I read it. But that might be because it's not my kind of genre. I would recommend reading it :)

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    L̶o̶v̶e̶ Save Me Detective (BOYLOVE)
    LGBT+ · beloved_writer
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_10mth
    Posted

    I never read anything like this before, but this was definitely worth the read. The story is deep the characters are well written and the concept is just something out of the ordinary. - Recommends reading this!

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    Outlandish impulse
    Sci-fi · Tailrs ink
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  • L0rdGr1m_
    L0rdGr1m_1yr
    Commented

    Oh no where's the blep God

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    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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