North Korea is nothing like the Scandinavian countries. I don't think you can compare socialism with them.
I'm in the learning phase, so I highly appreciate every piece of criticism my story gets.
Noted. Thanks for the comments, i will sit down to change and edit the story at one point, and your comments are very helpful. Thanks 😊
yes, vit and int determines how much you have, not levels
Not sure what you mean?
Should be said that the deadlock wasn't meant to be going on for minutes and only a few seconds. He go out of it since he could feel him losing the fight. Could have been explained better, and thanks I will take notes of every comment and improve the story :)
I have compressed the different windows so not to have it fill everything. And when he looked at the skill before, it was the skills detail window, its where the info of the skill is.
The story got more developed as i wrote it, and this is one of the things i changed. My story will get an major update when i have enough material, but as it is now small errors will persists through the story.
its not romance tagged so don't expect it
Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)
The plot is very unique, I never read anything like this before. The writing was decent, though first-person telling is not my cup of tea. Keep going and good work.
Not much of any errors. The story and characters are very good, (of what I read). You are explaining everything in great detail and you really feel like you get to know everything about the world and its characters. Thanks, it's a great story!
Unique plot. The story is very well written, character and world development are at a good pace. There arent many grammatical errors either. Overall 5/5 keep going
The story is way more interesting than I thought when I went into it. Other than grammatical errors the story is very well writing and it's something you can be proud of author-san.
The story is well writing. Everything is explained beautifully and you really feel immersed in the story. The pace and development are on point too. Definitely recommends!
i been sick the last week and still am. So i slept more than writing. But i will soon get back to writing 😁
I'm not really good at reviewing things. But what I can say is, that the quality of the writing is very good. You go into great details about the world and characters which is very good. Not too much and not too little, the balance is on point.
I usually avoid these types of stories, but when started reading it, I couldn't stop. First of all, the grammar, punctuations, etc are on point. (I'm not native, so I might not be the best judge). But overall was it a smooth read. Second, the story and characters are well written and you really get sucked into the world the author made. Though, sometimes I lost a bit of interest in the world and characters when I read it. But that might be because it's not my kind of genre. I would recommend reading it :)
I never read anything like this before, but this was definitely worth the read. The story is deep the characters are well written and the concept is just something out of the ordinary. - Recommends reading this!
Oh no where's the blep God