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why would he need to lick that duke....why exchange that fish( which is a rare commodity) ....there are too many plot holes....mc is just a loser without the system...even with the sys he is braindead...could have given 0 starts if possible
It was so good...but why he had to do f***ing charity so much.....do it if you want....Even I distribute things to a orphanage sometimes but why do it so much...I mean f*** a good novel was ruined because of this overdone shittt....please recommend me another Hollywood novel( non Chinese author) like this but not like with a braindead mc.....
most shitty novel I had ever tried....mc is basically braindead....why doesn't he fight for the throne...why does he acts like a retard all the time...it's practically a Chinese faceslapping novel...
Mc is a retard....if he has a system why don't he ran away to a different city where he can show his cultivation of +7th realm and live a better life....n that Rita...idk how many times I wanna go inside my screen to rip her apart myself....mc is practically a adult body with a mind of 3 year old....it's a just copy of Chinese novel nothing else....don't trust the tags none of it is true......
why didn't just killed that girl as well....damn that would be a total Fang yuan style
why would you bring that Katherine into the picture ....I will be glad if that heroin and her mother died suddenly or just let mc slaughter them both....I hate the fmc....story is good so as the world building but due to these two characters it has become a shit show
Why introduce a fmc...just killed that Feng Mei at the start...it's just another horny mc with brainded character
a shit....he didn't even killed the girl...a holy mother mc to be precise....if you are bored asf just go and read a princess novel...I bet that is even 100 times better than this shitt...a hypocrite mc with morals is more dangerous than straight out good guy
Saasy novel with no good foundation...dude it's a DC world not your Marvel and mc is energy itself...can't you see you have already given him the status of God....then wtf is the bromance in the initial chapters between mc, superman and that bat....honestly saying just make him kill everyone who stands in his way
Writing is too childish and too much cliche...he should have enslaved that girl at the beginning by torture or other means but no....he is making deals with a worthless woman....man go read something else ....this one is full of poison and a complete shitshow.