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Justin_Carlson1mthCommentedJust put it in your bag…..
Yu Ling sighed and put the mecha's propulsion drive back to its original position.- Justin_Carlson1mthCommented
I was hoping he would get a knock on the door later 🤷♂️
The fugitive was shot dead while escaping, and it was said that the whereabouts of the stolen money were unknown... - Justin_Carlson2mthCommentedBeatrice: "You know... loyalty shows itself in many ways... and while it's correct that you can both demonstrate loyalty while imposing limits on how far you're willing to go against your own beliefs in the name of your allegiance... the best way to be loyal is to act on behalf of the one you're sworn to while considering what is it that you can do and what is it that they desire..."
- Justin_Carlson2mthCommented-----This chapter contains a scene that isn't really lewd, but... kinda? Reader discretion is advised. Kinda-----
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Shouldn’t he go for another weapon and hopefully get a low tier sword… or another dagger like cmon man
To end the day, I thought about doing a roll in the [Mana Banners], if it worked out, my recently acquired [Mana Control] skill could allow me to not suffer from the effects of mana depletion. Sadly my hopes were shattered in that regard, as when I focused on this menu to look the cost for a single roll, it still said it would take a single mana point for the minimum roll, [Mana Control] or not, I'd be having mana depletion either way if I went for it. So, with nothing else to be done, it's time to turn off the lights and let the day end. - Justin_Carlson2mthCommentedBut when I focused on the [Weapons Banner] I reminded myself why it would be a bad idea overall, which made me question the legitimacy of rolling in it.
- Justin_Carlson2mthCommentedThat was it for the day, I didn't even have the energy to get frustrated about it and just sleep it off.
- Justin_Carlson2mthCommentedOf course, I waited until before going to bed to roll on it since it would decidedly put an end to my energy today.
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Ladders are noisy ish
This paragraph has been deleted. - Justin_Carlson2mthReplied to Justin_Carlson
Later in the paragraph you use the words correctly sorry for overstepping
"Yes, I would like to analyze how he fight." I wanted to see, how does the Galaxy Overlord fight. And how can I grow to be like him. If I wanted to become like him, then the way he fought will lead me to the path that I needed to take. - Justin_Carlson2mthCommented
Grammar correction: past tense and pretense is in question this time. You reference fight here when you are intending the past which would make the word to be fought. As fight would be a pretense and fighting would be present tense.
"Yes, I would like to analyze how he fight." I wanted to see, how does the Galaxy Overlord fight. And how can I grow to be like him. If I wanted to become like him, then the way he fought will lead me to the path that I needed to take. - Justin_Carlson2mthCommented
This novel has many errors within the grammar. You are referring to things in a sense of plural extremely often. Where most things have an s at the end of the word like ‘ships’ which would mean multiple ships when practically speaking you are referencing only one individual ship.
"Yes, I have chosen my way of fighting." I claimed, before fully going into the reasoning behind why I chose it. "I decided to choose a long distance sniping way of fighting. With some CQC mixed in if my opponent get close to me. I thought that sniping is the fastest and safest way for me to end the fight after it begun. And if my opponent managed to dodge my initial attack and get close to me thinking that I cannot fight over close quarters, then I unleash my Close Quarter Technique and surprised them before ending the fight while they're still shocked at my CQC." - Justin_Carlson2mthCommented" Gaddamn it, the bastards violating my god-daughter" Severus said as he tried to cover his ears and not hear about the sexy snu-snu going behind closed doors.
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Should be ships made of steel
The printing press, ships made of cement, gas lighting, beautiful mirror, cheap linen, and the compass were some of the new things scheduled for future unveiling. - Justin_Carlson2mthCommented
My thoughts are that the buckets would cause more drag, this aspect confuses me
But it would be too wrong for Diaogosis to disparage himself too much as he was no slouch either, for few possessed the ability to tell at a glance or just from hearing the description, why using buckets instead of straight blades or paddles were better. - Justin_Carlson2mthCommented"Good, good, good," Hearing the very 'good' answer, Alexander repeatedly said the word good, feeling like a ten-ton weight had been lifted off his chest.
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Why not cobble the roads with stones like England
So Alexander estimated conservatively per kilometer would cost him eleven to thirteen thousand (11,000 - 13,000) ropals, or a farmer's six to seven years of pay. - Justin_Carlson2mthCommented
How bout he slap himself for not thinking of it sooner lol
Feeling pleased as punch with himself for solving such a critical issue, Alexander finally returned his attention to what was happening around him and then turned to Yemin to ask him about other miscellaneous things. - Justin_Carlson3mthReplied to eaglesword
Those are condistions to be a marine
Individually he must be physically fit enough to run 5km in less than 18 minutes, do 100 sit-ups in two minutes, and perform 20 pull-ups In 3 minutes. - Justin_Carlson3mthCommented
Because it was more relatable in ancient times and in modern times it is much more difficult to reimagine a God or gods to depict the same relation that mideval and ancient times got. At this being said there is also our foundation in education and the heavy ‘question everything’ mentality currently circulating in society.
He had also always found it weird that many ancient religious scriptures claimed that gods fought with swords and arrows, and would always ask himself, 'If gods really did exist, then why do they use such primitive weapons?'