Robert_Luck

Sona

It’s pretty good, always love a good one piece fanfiction just update regularly and don’t drop and you’ll have a lot of people reading

Never mind, you do it in the next chapter

It’s really good and really interesting. I would probably just split up all the paragraphs that way it’s not so tightly packed.and hard to read

As good as always, keep it up

Very good story left waiting for a new chapter