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Alaura902yrCommentedGuys, stop complaining about the asterisk. The author already said that the app did it
Oh, no! Panic kicked in. They knew she was the Kings' sister. They wouldn't just kill her, they would probably **** her, torture her then kill her.- Alaura902yrReplied to humjampeg
Oof thank you :)
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I love the story so far. I’m about halfway through and I’m hooked. There is some repetition, especially in the beginning, but i think if the author did a quick proof read it would do wonders on this story. The characters are awesome. The group of friends reminds me somewhat of my childhood friends, drama and bickering but will still do anything for each other.
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It’s not like you were helping them look for it Lucian 🙄🤦♀️
Lucian tried to keep his calm but his nails were already elongating and his body itched for blood. "Bring them to me.!" - Alaura903yrReplied to Domenique_Guevara
No the correct form of a male witch is still witch. Witches get their magic from the moon goddess, the earth, or sometimes demons(black magic) so it’s also a religion... wizardry is not a religion it uses a complex system of operation and magical and enchanted items such as wands and potions. Witches can use items like this but they don’t need to.
How stupid she was. Of course he could. He was a witch so he would probably just make them fall asleep like Irene did. - Alaura903yrCommented
I feel like the writer was a little sleepy when she/he wrote this chapter. It just started and there are already so many mistakes
The woman's face turned blue. "You shouldn't go there My Lady. There is blood everywhere." - Alaura903yrCommented
They didn’t t call that style a “ponytail” yet, that’s a modern word. It would be more accurate to say “half of his hair was tied up and the rest fell... ect”
Enoch was tall and build, looking like the warrior type. His long blonde hair was tied in a half ponytail and the rest fell to his shoulders in smooth waves. His smooth skin was pale and unblemished and his eyes, a forest green that reminded her of warm summer days. With his extremely good looks and wearing all white, he looked like an angel. - Alaura903yrCommented
“Dried her hair” makes me think of blow drying but those weren’t invented yet
Klara wondered around the room for a while, opening the closets, testing the bed, looking out the window then she decided to take a bath. After the bath, she slid into a blue chiffon gown that she found in the closet then began to dry her hair. Now she only needed some food and some sleep, she thought. - Alaura903yrReplied to doreenlove
They were invented but they were a restaurant food. They wouldn’t be carrying some around while traveling horse back. More likely they would have stale bread and water or salt-dried meat, like jerky.
Klara found herself nodding again. Maybe she did lose her voice after all. The soldier came back with a sandwich which he gave to her then he took Lucian to the side and spoke to him about something. Lucian just nodded a few times then looked her way. Were they speaking about her? - Alaura903yrReplied to Shina_Summers
That was the author who answered you. She saId she didn’t blur it the app does that sometimes
Oh, no! Panic kicked in. They knew she was the Kings' sister. They wouldn't just kill her, they would probably **** her, torture her then kill her. - Alaura903yrReplied to lola38
Sure it does. They are solidifying just how innocent abi really is. She’s so innocent that she never even read a rated R book
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A sexy novel ;)
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Would it *be* possible
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*Lucian’s
My heart stopped and I quickly pulled myself from Lucian hold to see death waiting at the door. - Alaura903yrReplied to Graciela_Rodriguez_1357
Who do you mean
Sitting at the table and tried to eat something but felt sick. Nothing tasted good. I could see Lucian wasn't eating much either and had a concerned look on his face. We didn't say much to each other while eating, there was some kind of uncomfortable silence between us. - Alaura903yrReplied to Shirley_Paige
Ew rude. They were only trying to help
Sitting at the table and tried to eat something but felt sick. Nothing tasted good. I could see Lucian wasn't eating much either and had a concerned look on his face. We didn't say much to each other while eating, there was some kind of uncomfortable silence between us.