The story is interesting but with the asking and question chap is too much plus the advertise you make. it won't go anywhere if you do this, man.

The more I read the more poor quality of proof reading is. What is this? What happand all of a sudden?

I won't complian about the speech symbol anymore, at least at the latest chapter is in the correct way now.

The speech symbol is so bothering. Like can you at least use it in the correct way?

try som tum, this is famous in thai and spicy too. it depend on what you like whether you like sour, sweet or spicy.

it not a bluff dude, he gonna do it if no one has potential to be a hero

Who is chilli? Do you mean little Pepper?

I wonder, nobody talk about his power? Like what the heck, where do you take that (people from one piece especially whitebread and the crew)

silent wasn't it? I saw you write slient a few time now. it quite bothering when reading.

From the first chapter, the story is doing great so I use all of the power stone to vote for fanfic. I love it! keep the good work!

I forgot to give you the stone so here you go, I gave you all! I love To Love Ru and I am grateful that you continue the work and don't leave behind like other author!

Kinda weird to be honest...the pov is felt strange for me

I like this, the plot is not focus on the mc mainly. this is what group chat suppose to be! I sick of reading group chat that talking about mc op and the rest of the member is disspear!

did you forgot that Muzan can become a SHE?

kinda....annoy about hiratsuka now always beating up student if it were real life this kind of teacher could be expell

I scared of my mom that's why I scared of women.

???

Is Tanjirou and his girls coming with MC too? I'm not sure I kinda forgot that.

it's fine, you did the right thing. I kinda like your story for not just forget one girl and focus on the other girl.

I felt like every of your protagonist is the same person but just different name. they act the same, think the same, and have a harem. I kind of feel like this lately, the more I read the more I find that the story is become blunt because the way protagonist act and think. My English and writing is not the best so I might convey thing different, Sorry about that.