Universal_cherry

I enjoyed it and feel the emotion from each character. I understand their emotions and the way it’s going it feels like there’s going to be development. I would like more design for the character and a little bit more description for the environment.

I am really happy you like it!!

I like each and every character. Fight scene, are actually fun and it’s so smooth and I get lose while reading it. Also love Austin

Each character is so much fun.

Yeah :(

I liked the story and was how the beginning of the story started. The only problem is a few grammar issues besides that it is a really well-writen story.

Your right and I will be adding more detail in to it