alexandersmith

+1

I thought that the author dropped the book

yes

I always love books were the mc can drain life force or something similar from his enemies. I hope you don't drop this story because that would be disappointing.

yes

yes

yes

Hard to read with all that extra nonsense mixed in with the text

no

I usually don't read fanfictions were the mc replaces the original mc but I think you did it well and the story is also developing well. I wonder I you plan on having the mc be with chichi just so that Gohan is born or will the mc actually love her.