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Cryptic_werelord3mthCommentedwhy doesn't he choose an evolution option, or is he too dumb to notice it has options?
Devourer (lv MAX) (Evolution options available!)- Cryptic_werelord4mthCommented
adds an extra layer of defense to his already powerful physical defense
Victor looked at the lizard's body, but he couldn't tell exactly why its scales were black while it had steel in its name. It was either the fact that he had a skill that hardened its scales to become as strong as steel, or maybe the skill could turn its scales to actual steel. - Cryptic_werelord5mthCommented
hell boy is a fire imp.
Seeing the new skills and ability he gained this time around and confirming that the fire-imp had no other evolution further, Victor was sure it was time to advance to the next floor after his legion advanced in levels a bit. - Cryptic_werelord1yrCommented
wolfs don't sweat. that's why they pant when they get hot.
His eyes were shaking just by looking at the scene. He started to sweat profusely. - Cryptic_werelord1yrCommented
I think your mc is garbage tbh. it makes no sense on why he acts like a squeamish girl. the violence he's been through from a young age should have made him insensitive to it. causing no reactions from him when dealing with violence or violent situations. I think you don't know anything about psychology. but it's your story to tell, and it's definitely captivating for readers.
Ch 16 Disposable - Cryptic_werelord1yrReplied to chris_rukundo_0829
in all logical since it's more like Stockholm's syndrome where the a victim falls in love with their abuser
This paragraph has been deleted. - Cryptic_werelord1yrReplied to luisferCh 2 Growth Spurt!!!
- Cryptic_werelord1yrCommented
why don't you say paws. instead of claws?
The lion king roared and raised its upper body. It raised its two sharp claws and attacked him angrily! - Cryptic_werelord1yrReplied to JedII
- Cryptic_werelord2yrCommented
Glaives have a hook to pull riders from their mounts. And can come In different shapes and sizes.
The weapons rack at the side of the room still had plenty of weapons, including the glaive I'd practiced with so many times. I headed over, still unnoticed by my friends who were focused on their own training. The glaive wasn't anything special, made of iron with a simple curve design. - Cryptic_werelord2yrCommented
Thats awfully thin for a snake thats 13 feet long
[Your Dimensions has increased to 400 cm in length, 13 cm in Diameter] - Cryptic_werelord2yrCommentedCh 57 New Adventurers
- Cryptic_werelord2yrCommentedCh 57 New Adventurers
- Cryptic_werelord2yrReplied to John_Doever
I was mainly implying that even though She has accepted herself as a predator and started to fight back that she was still prey to the mc and that the mc would have to go through a drastic change on its outlook on things and the way it operates as Its individual self lol im tired
Ch 47 Dawn of the Devourer II