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just finished my binge read of this lovely novel and now it's time for a mini-review!!Overall, the story is superb. Although it does take a bit to pick up in pace, it's worth the wait. The slight errors in Grammer are neglible. Overall a great read. Can't wait for more!(side note- it'd be interesting if mc could use his quirk to maybe give/alter people's quirk factor. or maybe his at least. Only reason I say it'd be possible is when he mentioned how he shape-shifts, Like his body is lines of code and he just edits it. He could do that to others once he reaches a certain mastery over his quirk. Just a thought.)
because the only other powered person he's seen other than him and David is there? I feel like that's a good reason.
no problem! I try to do it when I catch repeated mistakes. I'd recommend re-reading what you have posted so far and check for errors.
I am now far more inclined to read this through. However, small tip, you often no place "i" before "am" so it comes as "am sorry, ____"
hopefully no harem.
"Dave seized the opportunity, "?? who's Dave? And what opportunity?
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This entire paragraph makes no sense.
so wait, this increases status durations for him? and Like skill effect-duration?
wait wait no this doesn't make sense. the dimensions harvester just let's you borrow the skill correct? if so; then the how did it level up? Did the training simply raise his own spearmenship aside from the other one? And at this point the other version of him has leveled that skill up to lvl 2?
should be "bracing" not "branching"
I REALLY hope this doesn't lead to excessive fawning over mc; and or harem.
"rhythm" is repeated to quickly.
"can't win against him"*
i'm sorry what? how did he get elemental abilities? he hasn't eaten anything or anyone with elemental magic and mimics generally wouldn't have elemental magic. please explain.