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Becky_Martinez3yrCommentedCh 468 The Long Lost Tale (Part XX)- Becky_Martinez3yrCommentedCh 460 The Long Lost Tale (Part XII)
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Author Kazzen I have to say you have ruined all other books for me. I try to get into other books and they are just not at the same caliber as your novels. And I can’t seem to force myself to read any more than a couple chapters I hope you’re happy 😃
Ch 456 The Long Lost Tale (Part VIII) - Becky_Martinez3yrCommentedCh 454 The Long Lost Tale (Part VI)
- Becky_Martinez3yrReplied to Meggles88
I said that in like chapTer 10 or 11. I believe if your brain is good enough to see the mistake its also good enough to correct it in your head so that you understand the intention. No need to point it out!
Hazel's hand's trailer down his body restlessly as if she was in a rush, then she took off the remaining of his clothes. Her eagerness was infectious so he pushed himself up and grabbed the hem of her nightgown. Hazel stretched her arms above her head making it easier for him to take it off. Despite having seen her bare body many times he felt his mouth fall open again and this time she didn't shy away or try to cover herself up. Instead, she grabbed his shoulder and straddled him. - Becky_Martinez3yrReplied to chinawaCh 448 Necklace
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- Becky_Martinez3yrCommentedRoshan watched her silently for a while. "I am a demon."
- Becky_Martinez3yrCommented"You know, you just want me to say it out loud." He said slowly strolling toward her "or maybe you want me to show you."
- Becky_Martinez3yrCommented
Guys give her a break... This is an app, not the public library. Also do you know why we see very few mistakes in published books?? Cause the publishers pay editors good money to do that kind of thing. You know what was meant its got to be frustrating for every mistake to be pointed out by multiple people, over and over, also how slow would the chapters come if she had to pour over every word with a fine toothed comb. You obviously like the story or else you wouldn’t be on chapter 53. Read and enjoy!!
Lucian watched the castle, where he used to live, where he had grown up, from a mountain far away. The castle where heavily guarded. Every gate, every corner, every door were guarded by soldiers with weapons. It would be impossible to enter and kill his brother unless his brother decided to come out. - Becky_Martinez3yrReplied to Juanita_Mauricio
Me too!!
"My Lady, drink this." Callum said holding a bottle of water next to my mouth. - Becky_Martinez3yrCommented
Don’t cave Hazel!! She is trying to manipulate you!
I...I was a bad wife, a useless one. Yes, I never gave anything to Lucian and there was nothing I could give him now either, on top of that because of my selfishness I could cause his death. - Becky_Martinez3yrCommented
The truth is Hazel would never be safe with that woman a second wife. That woman would kill Hazel to make herself first wife and only wife.
"Besides unlike you I am willing to share him with you. That's because I know he cares about you and I care about him. Would you be able to do that for him? If I was selfish would I do that? " She asked. - Becky_Martinez3yrCommented"I know you want your husband for yourself, but if he dies you can't have him at all. It seems you don't care, you are putting him in danger for selfish reasons."
- Becky_Martinez3yrCommentedHis eyes widened. That came as a surprised. He knew she liked him, desired him but loved him? He never thought she would use that word.
- Becky_Martinez3yrCommented
YAY!!! Now you do not have to worry about me annoying you Chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter
"I am not going to marry Klara." Lucian said. - Becky_Martinez3yrCommented
Author i like this book and i just bought a lot of couns to batch unlock the next 50 chapters. But I will not continue if he takes Klara... I mean I probably will but I’ll be mad and probably tell you about it chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter After chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter after chapter. And as you can tell I can be pretty annoying. Man I hope he does not marry her
Lucian wasn't sure about that. Hazel was already angry with him and he had hurt her enough. He didn't want to anymore. Maybe if he spoke to Klara he might change her mind. - Becky_Martinez3yrReplied to Krystina_Reilly
Oh thats my why i’m supersized!! So I can be enough, more than enough for my husband!!
Ouch, my stomach hurt. This time not because I was hungry but because I had eaten too much. I felt as if my stomach was going to explode. Lucian was sitting in front of me and seemed to be thinking about something, ignoring him I stuffed the rest of the food into my mouth. He probably thought I was eating unlady like but you know what? I didn't care anymore. Since I wasn't enough for him I planned on getting fat, maybe then I would be enough.