Darrell_Jordan
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Darrell_Jordan8mthCommentedCh 19 Meeting the Family's Part 2- Darrell_Jordan11mthReplied to _Avatar0FFury_
I'm sorry wrong story
His hulking muscles tensed as the slim panther suit vibrated against him. The Vibranium laced into the fabrics like a second skin heated and pulsed. Brontë tensed as the blast ripped through his skin and clanged against his bio-metal skeleton, ripping the skin off his chest and face in a flash. - Darrell_Jordan11mthCommented
if I remember correctly, didn't his adamantium get ripped out
His hulking muscles tensed as the slim panther suit vibrated against him. The Vibranium laced into the fabrics like a second skin heated and pulsed. Brontë tensed as the blast ripped through his skin and clanged against his bio-metal skeleton, ripping the skin off his chest and face in a flash. - Darrell_Jordan1yrCommented
just my opinion, but most stories I read on here are really good and hold my interest enough to keep me coming back to it, but when other things get added that are different from the main scope of the story , it throws off the flow of the story and steers it off of what made it good and makes it less interesting to me. just my opinion .
Ch 97 Legend of Balrog - Darrell_Jordan1yrCommented
so what happens when Malia turns back human
I am really trying to keep Mc away from the main plot while trying to move his plot along, if you guys read this chapter and believe that it is not good and that I should change it in any way, you can comment it. I will delete this one and make a new one. - Darrell_Jordan1yrCommentedCh 53 Asahi's Schemes
- Darrell_Jordan2yrReplied to Andrewstewart002Ch 53 kuzuri part 1
- Darrell_Jordan2yrCommentedCh 58 Low on Energy
- Darrell_Jordan2yrCommentedCh 46 Anger
- Darrell_Jordan2yrCommentedCh 4 The System
- Darrell_Jordan2yrCommentedCh 816 The last turn
- Darrell_Jordan3yrCommentedCh 546 Into space!
- Darrell_Jordan3yrCommentedCh 12 The Prodigal Son
- Darrell_Jordan3yrCommentedCh 108 Logan an Android