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Erebus96

Erebus96

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Since your here already why don't you check out my Webnovel “More than Blood and Bones”

2020-08-31 JoinedUnited States
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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Replied to Krombopulos

    What part didn’t you understand?

    All three of us followed Asaroth down the winding staircase made of old stones that could give way at any moment. The staircase was still wet from the pond water, so unless I wanted to fall down Lucifer knows how many stairs watching my step was paramount.
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  • Erebus96
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    Commented

    Good chapter.

    Ch 5 A Real Monster and The Black Masked Demons
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    Life is harder on some than it is on others. Not that I support suicide as a way out or anything. But a person all alone in the world with no family, friends or money does sound a little sad to me.

    Finally, it was Vera's turn to speak and what she said left Marcus and I wishing she stayed quiet. Vera said that her mother left when she was still a baby due to opium addiction. Her father was talented but lacked the motivation and drive to be successful, which lead to him making a deal with King Belial. After her father's contract came to an end Vera was left all alone with very little money due to her father's spending habits. She came to realize that all the people that claimed to care about her only appeared to do so because of Patxi's reputation. So after he was dragged away, all those people turned their backs on her. She took up odd jobs here and there but in the end, she took her life while laying in a warm bath and placing a small blade on her wrist.
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  • Erebus96
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    Commented

    Can I go next? Only without the crashing part lol

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    Commented

    I knew it....the boogeyman was real!

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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
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    Just a Webnovel author trying to support his own work. Join my boy Damien on this epic journey. Enjoy Marcus's lame jokes that seem to lighten the mood in some of the grimmest of times. And Vera.... Wait who's Vera? She wasn't in the novel description. What are you still reading this review for? Go read the Novel and find out :) I really hope you enjoy the story and look forward to seeing you in the comment section.

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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Replied to Krombopulos

    Thank you for the insight, I'll work on fixing that. and I'm happy to know your enjoying the story

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 Talking Amongst The Trees
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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Replied to Krombopulos

    Are you enjoying the story so far?

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 Talking Amongst The Trees
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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Replied to Krombopulos

    I will do my best to live up to the name.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 A New Face Followed By An Old One
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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Replied to Mymylove06

    Thank you 😁

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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Posted

    The story is put together really well and the writing quality is good as well. It’s easy to follow and keeps me wanting to read more. keep up the great work author ✍️

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  • Erebus96
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    Commented
    "Using your mind"
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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Commented

    Good 1st chapter. Like you said it could have been longer but other then that i have no issues 👍🏼

    Ch 2 ~1~
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  • Erebus96
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    Replied to King_Noran

    Thank you 🙏🏻

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  • Erebus96
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    The stroy is pretty good a few minor issues here and there but over all a good story so far. Keep up the great work and I look forward to more.

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  • Erebus96
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    Walking back home, he stared at a big billboard that warns "Wear your masks, beware of Twisters!", a billboard that made him scoff and shake his head.
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  • Erebus96
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    'This day sucks THE fattest ass.' he ranted to himself once again, as if he's hoping that someone, something in his mind would comfort him. It's not surprising that nothing did.
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  • Erebus96
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    However, it nothing like that at all. He disliked being just all the time. If anything else, he embraces the idea of freedom and self-indulgence.
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  • Erebus96
    Erebus962yr
    Commented

    When your training pays off great chapter

    Ch 4 Training and a Royal’s Birthday
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