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First of all the story is interesting though I occasionally read romance genere. But this book is really awesome. But I wanna suggest some things to writer. Cover and Syonpsis try to add a splendid cover and a synopsis those two would definitely benefit you. Other thing is there were no comma or indications between dialogues it seem like it goes on with the narration or might get mistaken with someone else's dialogue so make sure to use comma between dialogues so it will look more organised and won't get mixed with narration. Apart from this the writing and creation is enjoyable really good one keep writing Author.
šHello it's your shameless Author here, hope you are enjoying my novel. Though, I am not a pro. But am trying my best to reach that level, so guys if you enjoy it do support my work it really helps. If you won't like it than also you can tell your reading experience with your honest opinions in the comments. Thank youšš
The story is good, the writing and narrations were amusing but I find mild issues with few dialogues the rest is boom. Great work author.
š¤£š¤£Yup actually this book had a long journey first I started it here then go to MN but due to bad luck I get non-exclusive contractš„²š do no MAB no bonuses all you can count is readers unlocking premium chapters I waited and write for 6 months but can't able to get any of those premium readers also the completion bonus is 50$ so at last I terminate the contract and decide to pause this one for sometimeš„
Glad to hear thanks palš