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  • CALEX20
    CALEX2012h
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    Deberías de haber salido tambien con chichi, de niña no era igual y la razon de su cambio fue culpa del goku original. Sabemos que goku era un idiota, que solo le interesaba entrenar, era normal que chichi no quisiera que gohan fuera igual, vamos jaja prefirió entrenar en el otro mundo que revivir para cuidar de su esposa embarazada y de su hijo.

    Por supuesto, también tuve ayuda extra, pero eso es para otro día ya que ahora mismo esperaba nuevamente el día en que aparecería mi futura esposa, es decir, Bulma, no es que sea mi prometida ahora, pero lo será, ni de broma me casare con Milk, ella sin duda esta en el puesto mas bajo de las personas que me gustan en dragón ball, prefiero a Ulong que a Milk
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201d
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    Mera Poison Ivy Harley

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    Being A Psychic In DC
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201d
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    yes

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    Being A Psychic In DC
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    CALEX201d
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    yes

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  • CALEX20
    CALEX2016d
    Replied to Jetstorm

    The story has a continuation, it has more than 1700 chapters and its last update was a week ago I think

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    Marvel's gene collection system
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX2016d
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    As I think you already noticed author-san, to many of us it does not seem like a good idea to add kitty pryde in that way, as it will cause changes to the canon, we do not expect you to follow the canon peri if it is consistent since it is not AU you are looking for there are more character options or you may not specifically add mutants. For example use some girls of the first generation, like the butterfly girl who spits fireballs or Psylocke before she is with apocalypse. I will not lie to many of us, we would like kitty to appear in the story, but that it is well justified. You could even add Captain Marvel before she joined the army, so you would have better scenes and a better relationship for new scenarios for the story. Even using characters that were not mentioned in the movies and are from the comics. Example the squirrel girl who defeated thanos or characters of that style. Even a new character would be more acceptable. But at the end of it all, author-san is "his" story and you can write however you like.

    Ch 33 Chapter 33: Kitty Pryde
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    Marvel's gene collection system
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX2022d
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    Harem harem harem harem: bulma, chichi, No. 18 (Don't leave her with krillin)

    Ch 59 The power to stop time
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    In Dragon Ball as Goku
    Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Commented

    Rangiku, Unohana, Harribell, Nelliel, kukaku Shin, Soi Fong, Kirio Kirikune ( use AI to develop a better technique so you don't have to get fat, something like seals where you keep your power, like the Tsunade technique from Naruto).

    If anyone has any recommendation please comment.
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    Transmigrated to Bleach!
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Commented

    HAHAHA That's like a kick to the genitals, strong but certainly real

    Lucas who heard his story didn't show much expression. He took his cigarette and threw it off, since it turned went, and pointed to James with his finger, which wasn't shacking "Listen, no matter what social level you reach, or how much knowledge you have, and no matter how many books you have read, how many you have, none of them will teach you how to make a woman happy." (unless she needs sugar daddy)
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    Sinful life with the strongest system
    Anime & Comics · EroJaki
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Commented

    jajajaja good

    "I take back what I said.... . He's a fucking pervert! !!!!!!
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
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    this one

    (1) 7 chapters a week of Godson and Godfather
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Replied to kandepi2

    it means that dumbledore did something stupid to let him get away. Author-san I am lost in the chronology of events, could you explain the ages of the MC when everything he did happened

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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Commented

    yes

    YES
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
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    With an actual height of 6 foot 2 inches, he was hunched over so instead, he only stood at 5 foot 10 inches. His limps were disproportionate, one of his eyes was larger than the other, and all in all he looked like some hunchback monster.
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
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    MOORE X2

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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Replied to Long_ChinChin

    mi error jaja, pero me refiero a que seria incoherente no agregar a esas chicas, cuando sabemos que hay una vieja recepcionista que quiere meterse con el mc, entendería que no metieras a la vieja recepciones pero perdería algo de coherencia la historia. la vieja recepcionista es la que esta en hospital, que te pide favores a cambio de lo que necesitas en la misión de la sirvienta y de la tia. la recepcionista se llama Roz

    Como el definitivamente no le interesaban ninguna de las dos...
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    I am in Summertime Saga? (Por LongChinChin)
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
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    jajajaja lo siento, la costumbre de escribir en ingles en esta pagina, me refiero a que seria interesante para tu historia si haces que mc cambie a los personajes, con su actitud, igual que en el juego ayudando los y cosas asi. que meter a la directora y a annie con el personaje, porque si bien su actitud no es buena, sabemos que son lindas o sexys en especial annie. creo que podrías desarrollar una historia con ella, la directora y su mama por ejemplo, también recordando que annie es uno de los personajes mas solicitados para una historia en juego que de hecho es de las próximas actualizaciones.

    Como el definitivamente no le interesaban ninguna de las dos...
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    I am in Summertime Saga? (Por LongChinChin)
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
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    another thing, if the mc is given to the elderly receptionist and not to annie and the director hahahaha it would be too strange and I would lose coherence

    Como el definitivamente no le interesaban ninguna de las dos...
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    I am in Summertime Saga? (Por LongChinChin)
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
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    dear author-san I think it would be a good idea. to make the mc change the director to annie, it would be interesting and would add more to the story if you gave it that dramatic twist by helping annie like she had a problem with the director. Those of us who know the game know that Annie is one of the most requested characters by summertime saga fans, which in fact I think will be one of the new updates. Not only would you satisfy some of your readers, but it would be justified and it could be one of the great dramas in your story, so that although it is something like wish fulfillment, it would be a great addition to the story making it even better. but it is his story and his decisions are respected dear author-san was just advice.

    Como el definitivamente no le interesaban ninguna de las dos...
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    I am in Summertime Saga? (Por LongChinChin)
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  • CALEX20
    CALEX201mth
    Commented

    more more more more more more more

    Ch 5 4
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    I am in Summertime Saga? (Por LongChinChin)
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