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Deberías de haber salido tambien con chichi, de niña no era igual y la razon de su cambio fue culpa del goku original. Sabemos que goku era un idiota, que solo le interesaba entrenar, era normal que chichi no quisiera que gohan fuera igual, vamos jaja prefirió entrenar en el otro mundo que revivir para cuidar de su esposa embarazada y de su hijo.
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As I think you already noticed author-san, to many of us it does not seem like a good idea to add kitty pryde in that way, as it will cause changes to the canon, we do not expect you to follow the canon peri if it is consistent since it is not AU you are looking for there are more character options or you may not specifically add mutants. For example use some girls of the first generation, like the butterfly girl who spits fireballs or Psylocke before she is with apocalypse. I will not lie to many of us, we would like kitty to appear in the story, but that it is well justified. You could even add Captain Marvel before she joined the army, so you would have better scenes and a better relationship for new scenarios for the story. Even using characters that were not mentioned in the movies and are from the comics. Example the squirrel girl who defeated thanos or characters of that style. Even a new character would be more acceptable. But at the end of it all, author-san is "his" story and you can write however you like.
Rangiku, Unohana, Harribell, Nelliel, kukaku Shin, Soi Fong, Kirio Kirikune ( use AI to develop a better technique so you don't have to get fat, something like seals where you keep your power, like the Tsunade technique from Naruto).
HAHAHA That's like a kick to the genitals, strong but certainly real
jajajaja good
this one
it means that dumbledore did something stupid to let him get away. Author-san I am lost in the chronology of events, could you explain the ages of the MC when everything he did happened
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mi error jaja, pero me refiero a que seria incoherente no agregar a esas chicas, cuando sabemos que hay una vieja recepcionista que quiere meterse con el mc, entendería que no metieras a la vieja recepciones pero perdería algo de coherencia la historia. la vieja recepcionista es la que esta en hospital, que te pide favores a cambio de lo que necesitas en la misión de la sirvienta y de la tia. la recepcionista se llama Roz
jajajaja lo siento, la costumbre de escribir en ingles en esta pagina, me refiero a que seria interesante para tu historia si haces que mc cambie a los personajes, con su actitud, igual que en el juego ayudando los y cosas asi. que meter a la directora y a annie con el personaje, porque si bien su actitud no es buena, sabemos que son lindas o sexys en especial annie. creo que podrías desarrollar una historia con ella, la directora y su mama por ejemplo, también recordando que annie es uno de los personajes mas solicitados para una historia en juego que de hecho es de las próximas actualizaciones.
another thing, if the mc is given to the elderly receptionist and not to annie and the director hahahaha it would be too strange and I would lose coherence
dear author-san I think it would be a good idea. to make the mc change the director to annie, it would be interesting and would add more to the story if you gave it that dramatic twist by helping annie like she had a problem with the director. Those of us who know the game know that Annie is one of the most requested characters by summertime saga fans, which in fact I think will be one of the new updates. Not only would you satisfy some of your readers, but it would be justified and it could be one of the great dramas in your story, so that although it is something like wish fulfillment, it would be a great addition to the story making it even better. but it is his story and his decisions are respected dear author-san was just advice.