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I really like these moments; they make the boy genius more human and likable. I like his relationship with Haley and his respectful approach to Sheldon. Great episode.

I like the relationship he is having with Haley and his relationship with his family.

Haley yes

You could try it and see how it turns out, if when you write it it turns out well and interesting for you, for my sake.

Sounds good, you could get some good interactions if you handle both Bakuga, like when Devil and Angel argue.

To start with, Roshi's dynamics are part of the design that connects with the majority, since being comedic makes him likable to fans and the characters themselves. Because when he takes them off, he's just someone too serious, which could be tiresome and take away from the impact. Hmm, I could imagine it this way. I imagine Roshi would maintain his original personality, but make him comedic by using the MC as a barrier or checkpoint. Like hitting him when he crosses the line or tries something with those close to him, but exaggerating with the other characters, such as the nurses. That way, the MC would take the girls' place when they got angry and hit Roshi after he upset them.

I was hesitant about the story due to personal tastes, but adding B99 made me add it to my library. On a personal note, I'm curious about the MC's love interest. This isn't a request to reveal it, but it does intrigue me. As a personal taste, I prefer Haley. I've never understood why many fanfics like Alex more. Overall, the chapters have been good, the dialogue is natural, everything is fine, a good story, author san

For me it is a good story, but if I want to see something new or different, it is the story of someone fulfilling their wishes in their favorite programs. It fulfills its purpose by entertaining and satisfying those moments in the stories in which we would like to intervene. It is not something new, nor with intrigues and moments of suspense or extreme changes in the plots, on the contrary it follows the plot with small modifications for satisfaction or added moments that replace other scenarios. great story boss

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