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Sniperking

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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Silver_smile

    Because I know we saw her remembering what she did and regretting her actions and deciding to apologize to him. But we don't see anything on his side that explains why he forgave her, did we?

    Ch 40 Bonfire of warmth
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Silver_smile

    That's good to hear, thank you. I still believe they should have communicated and resolved their issues before you depicted them as all lovey-dovey. Rather than planning to address this in later chapters, an immediate explanation for this shift in attitude would have been more beneficial. However, you're the author, so whatever suits your narrative best. I'm just happy that you'll eventually address this issue.

    Ch 40 Bonfire of warmth
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Duke_Asmodeus

    " I thanked you for the correction; neither salty nor bothered." Your second response to my comment(which you deleted) was literally "crying wall of text", you can't expect me to believe that you thought that was a nice thing to say and that you weren't bothered, do you? and if so, why delete it then ? And your thanking me was after implying I was abnormal. Again you expect me to think it was genuine? Your second comment was juvenile and does not speak well of you, but at least you seemed to realize it enough to delete it before others saw it. "You did claim to know my thoughts, though; claiming I don't care is exactly that." Again, I did not claim anything. I said it was "like" you didn't care since wrote a bad synopsis which is really weird since it's the first thing new readers look at. As a reader, I have nothing else to go on except what you write. It's like seeing a badly edited novel and asking why doesn't the author care enough to check these things. You can argue that maybe it was too harsh and I can accept that. But your behaviour here is just not the way to approach things. "The review had nothing to do with the story. You mentioned only the synopsis.I was polite enough to thank you, focus on that next time." If you wanted to argue this point then this would have been sensible. If you believe I didn't read your story and the review was based solely on the synopsis then that's fine, and that was something we could have talked about. But don't act like you were polite and appreciative yet delete your comments and imply rude things at the same time. At that point, it's not even worth it and you just look bad.

    altalt
    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Duke_Asmodeus

    Dude, you need help

    altalt
    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Duke_Asmodeus

    I didn't and do not claim to know anything about you. Your synopsis was written badly and I wanted you to see it and improve it. If anything, your indirectly calling me an abnormal person is a lot stronger than what I said. I don't know how to comment on the main page without leaving a rating, and that rating was given after reading your story, although not all of it which is why I mentioned I hadn't read enough of it. Everybody makes mistakes, take constructive criticism about things that are actually bad and make your story better. Don't get unnecessarily salty about it unless you're actually abused. You're the one who benefits from every revision and correction your story gets.

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    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Silver_smile

    I don't think you did but I might be wrong. It seemed like an important plot point that wasn't explained and left me very confused

    Ch 40 Bonfire of warmth
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Silver_smile

    that would be great

    Derek slowly patted her flowing white hair and muttered "your hair is beautiful". He was indirectly apologizing for his past actions. Though his words were short, her lips curved into a blissful smile and her eyelids trembled. Unknown to Derek, his words meant more than just an apology to Angel.
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Silver_smile

    In the beginning, she did not know why he was cold to her, she later remembers that she did something really bad to him.

    Both him and few of Angel's cousins were the ones who caused their separation and they made her do it in such a painful way promising that it was the only way to make Derek forget her, for him at that moment, Derek wasn't worth anything, he never imagined such a situation would happen years later.
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
    detail
  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Posted

    Haven't read this enough to give a full review but the Synopsis says: "A goddess had doomed humanity with impending doom" Come on author, it's like you don't even care

    altalt
    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Commented

    Still very confused about them, maybe I missed a chapter where they talked about everything. I mean normally shouldn't he still be upset about what happened in the past (which hasn't been fully revealed yet). And I thought she was going to apologize and they would have that conversation.

    Ch 40 Bonfire of warmth
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Commented

    Like seriously? There's no conversation to resolve all the issues they had? It's like it never happened and we've skipped to them being lovey-dovey?

    "What!!" Both of them hollered, but there were different meanings behind their shocked tone. Derek didn't understand why Angel would be a distraction.
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Commented

    Very confused. I thought she did something in the past and that was why he was cold. Did none of that happen?

    Derek slowly patted her flowing white hair and muttered "your hair is beautiful". He was indirectly apologizing for his past actions. Though his words were short, her lips curved into a blissful smile and her eyelids trembled. Unknown to Derek, his words meant more than just an apology to Angel.
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
    detail
  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Replied to Silver_smile

    He's justifying why he should be allowed to cry. As in he's a teleporter but he's also emotionally unstable right no

    "It's been a long time since I saw a teleporter crying like a kid"
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    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Commented

    what exactly happened?

    Would Derek ever forgive her? This question kept ringing in her head even when she tried to ignore it.
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking10mth
    Commented

    so she just forgot all this when they met again?

    Both him and few of Angel's cousins were the ones who caused their separation and they made her do it in such a painful way promising that it was the only way to make Derek forget her, for him at that moment, Derek wasn't worth anything, he never imagined such a situation would happen years later.
    altalt
    Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
    Sci-fi · Silver_smile
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking2yr
    Commented

    in shoulder-length (student), delete student

    That opportunity came soon after, in the form of a student with a distinctive pale blond hair, cut in shoulder-length student, sitting alone in a concealed desk, her attention firmly on the book in front of her. Helga, I recognized her. Disjointed memories of other students insulting and bullying her came soon after, because she was not only a foreigner, but also she belonged to a merchant family, and not a particularly rich one either. The only reason she was able to gain admission to Silver Tower was because of her prodigious talent, passing many of the noble students.
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    Leveling through Lust
    Fantasy · Dirk_Grey
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking2yr
    Replied to Storm_Creator

    very confusing

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    Spirit Cultivation
    Eastern · Piokilek
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking2yr
    Replied to DevotedOne

    remember she is a secret bodygaurd

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    Spirit Cultivation
    Eastern · Piokilek
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking2yr
    Replied to

    remember she is a secret bodygaurd

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    altalt
    Spirit Cultivation
    Eastern · Piokilek
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  • Sniperking
    Sniperking2yr
    Replied to Iron_M

    I would like to know this song

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    Spirit Cultivation
    Eastern · Piokilek
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