Real review Writing quality is good. There are plenty of mistakes but nothing too serious usually so it doesnt put you off. Its not good enough tho so 3 stars. Stability of updates is the biggest problem. Not only did the author disappear for like a month after posting one chapter at the start of the previous month to make people buy privilege (keep in mind that he had also disappeared at the last half of February but he returned to post that one chapter) but he also returned only 5 days before this month was over wasting everyone who paid for privilege. And as if that wasnt enough instead of making it up to the readers for how badly he ****ed everyone who paid for privilege last month he simply said **** it and created an even more expensive priv tier that costs 30 dollars. Now if it was worth it and the author wasnt acting dishonestly the privi would probably be worth it but its not and its all because of the next part the story development. In all honesty this deserved 2 stars but nonetheless I gave it 3 stars because of the earlier chapters. The premise was original but apparently the author either got lazy or lost all his creativity while writing, repeating things over and over, repeating system screen and stats to fill the word count at the same time. The earlier chapters were definitely good tho which is why I gave this 3 stars instead of 2 which it honestly deserves after chapter 180. World Background: Honestly this is the only good part which is what I gave 4 stars. Although it feels like a rip off of Solo Leveling done worse and there are huge inconsistencies in the story (read and you will find out) it was still interesting enough to give 4 stars. Overall, I would say that the story had a lot of potential and I am not against the authors making money from priv considering that webnovel probably doesnt pay them shit but you need to make the money spent worth it. Updating at the start of the month for people to buy your expensive privilege while disappearing is dishonest and EVERYONE who spent money for priv last month felt scammed and not worth it

I dont even mind the content that a chapter has but you have the balls to put a new priv tier after giving ppl 7 chapters the entire last month?

MC from Cultivation Online is also blind for many years (this was written before this novel by the way) and you will not find any chinese racism in original novels so I suggest that you give it a try instead.

This is not reasonable. Who would stop thinking about such a matter simply because they can't do anything about it just yet? This is not something you can consciously think or not and its not something you can ignore just because you want to either.

idiot

you are the only self-judger here clown. I simply refuse to agree to what you are trying to project because you are an idiot, not because it's common human sense.

Aside from being an idiot, a hypocrite, and someone who self-judges others and tries to project himself as being a victim you are also a liar! Very interesting! Let me refresh your memory then. Your words were that this book is way better than that trash MVS in your opinion. So aside from everything else you are also a pathetic excuse of a liar! You obviously butted in in this review because you wanted to argue, but take your pathetic mental problems elsewhere next time or people will call you out for your bullshit and your lies kid. What a disgusting liar and pathetic hypocrite.

And like I told you the last time, you are obviously a clown who is trying to stand on a moral high-ground but you don't understand that you are nothing but a piece of shit who came in this conversation by yourself and tried to project your opinion on others while defending your friend. Now back to your hole you pathetic trash

You came here to ''knock some sense into me'' like you said but I am the hypocrite and the self judger? YOU ARE THE ONE WHO JUDGED MY REVIEW! YOU ARE THE ONE WHO WANTED TO KNOCK SOME SENSE INTO ME BY PROJECTING YOUR OWN VIEWS.

HAHAHA! This is clear proof that you are a clown! You already mentioned down below that you think that MVS is a trash novel in your opinion! These were your words you dumb****! And now you say that you haven't even read it? So it's a trash novel despite not having read it? Pathetic and envious clown go back to your hole for the last time, you are disgusting.

Nah this is you projecting your views into others you dumb clown. First of all you say that you came to knock some sense into me but this is what it means to project your views into others. This is immoral but you already know of it but it's obvious that you are a 14 year old kid with too much self-justification.

I have no proof that what I did was not based on vengeance? Damn clown learn how to properly communicate with others first. I don't need proof to show that my review was not based on vengeance, if anything it's your friend who has to do that dumb idiot

Now you and your friend can both be envious that you are nowhere near to MyVampireSystem in terms of popularity, hell you probably don't even have anyone willing to read your book which explains your friend's hateful review as well as your acts of desperately trying to defend him, but at the end of the day it doesn't change what you are. A pathetic hypocrite who closes one eye in your own and your friend's wrongdoings and yet you try to act self-judjemental to others. No one asked for your opinion on my review and yet you hurriedly butted in to immediately attack me and call me vengeful and yet you demand respect and to not be called a clown? You are a clown and a hypocritical clown at that. Now for the second time today, go back to your hole and keep crying about having no one to read your trash story while projecting hate on books like MyVampireSystem because they are successfull while you are a noname idiot who can only call that book trash but can't write anything good yourself. As for why others are willing to read that trash and not yours and your friend's book, it doesn't take a genius to figure that out now does it?

You are once again projecting your views onto others. I never said that my review was based on vengeance, you are simply trying to project your views into others. My review was objective because this book is 21 chapters filled with filler, yet you said time and time again that my review was done out of spite or vengeance. You are the one who keeps pushing this narrative over and over again, and you keep defending someone who leaves hateful reviews one after the other without any substance. When you leave hateful reviews however that have no basis, you should clearly expect the same. As for hypocrites like you, you deserve no respect.

This is exactly WHAT YOU ARE DOING though. You are pushing your and your friend's judgmental acts towards others when you are confronted for doing the same thing. You have no right to judge others for doing the same thing you are doing. This is what being a hypocrite means. You are a hypocrite. You are the one who is self-judging others. You are the one who tried to act self-righteously by defending your friend's disgusting actions of leaving a hateful review for no reason and without any substance. Now back to your hole

Damn you really are a clown. Let me break down your points then. Use google to understand what the word racist means because only dumb clowns would say that someone is racist because they don't agree with them. I'm a racist if I don't agree with your 1-star review? Dumb clown. Again, you avoided for the second time your friend's review and you just said that he clearly stated his reasons. His reasons were simply that the novel is trash. Now you accuse me of being vengeful and doing the same to him, but you just didn't think that perhaps his novel is even more trash. I have every right to do what he did whether you like it or not. It does not matter if you are unwilling to accept this, it is a fact at the end of the day. As for race being related to someone's taste in webnovel, I suggest you go back to school because you are obviously uneducated aside from being a clown. TLDR Learn what the word racist means, and next time don't try to partonize others. Your friend left a hateful review and got a hateful review. His novel is thousands of time worse than MyVampireSystem. No they can't even be compared. You have every right to think that it is trash but others can also think the same about your friend's absolute garbage novel.

I am being racist? Do you understand what being racist is? Was any mention of any race (white, black, asian,) mentioned anywhere? Disgusting hypocrite go back and see your friend's review one more time, then understand that your pathetic attempt to defend him is nothing more than foolishness. He stated no reasons and he simply called the novel trash! He deserved this review and then you come here like a white knight to defend him after this. At the same time he deleted all the previous reviews in this novel (including yours) and only left this one. Very suspicious I wonder why. Go back and check his review now and point out a single comment that directly coorelates to the story and has substance, without making his review a hate review. Hypocrite

He stated no reasons go back and look at the review you disgusting hypocrite.

you clearly don't know what you are doing. at the same time you are also a hypocrite and a dumb clown which is why I am calling you as such. You already said in a previous comment that you have also left a 1 star review on MVS for no reason, and you also said that you agree with your friend's review. Since you seem incapable of understanding proper english, let me help you out and enlighten on you what is going on. Your friend as a dumb clown left a 1 star review on MyVampireSystem that ONLY SAID that the book is trash and everything in the book is trash. Now, when I left a 1-star review on your friend you suddenly butted in saying that what I am doing is vengeful. No one asked for your opinion clown. You are clearly defending someone who did something wrong, and yet you act as if he did nothing wrong. This is what it means to be a hypocrite. Your friend who is a no name trash left a spiteful review on MyVampireSystem without criticising anything or leaving a review of any value, just saying that everything there is trash. And as an even bigger hypocrite, you said that you read his review and that you agreed. Since your friend has every right to insult someone's hard work by calling it trash (when it is the most sold and most liked webnovel here), I have every reason to insult you 2 clowns back. Disgusting hypocrite

Didn't you 2 idiots leave hateful reviews when no one asked you? Go check your buddy's (or your alt's) review on My Vampire System before you type again. His words clearly were world building? trash character development? what development do trash have? Story progression? trash Next time you try to attack someone from a moral standpoint, remember how retarded you look when there is evidence of such a hateful review that didn't criticize anything substantial and instead just tried to bloat his own ego. Next time know of what you did before you try to complain about others doing the same to you dumb clown