Young aspiring writer. My work may not be too good so please let me know ways I could improve my work.
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I know you wanted me to edit this for you but I really don't see any need for it. The story is really interesting and I can't find many issues at all. Happy writing! ^-^
I absolutely love the way this is written! I am reminded of a real Anime when I read this and it's the type of thing I really enjoy. It's a very charming book and I can't wait for the next upload, keep it up! <3
It was a very good story and I really can't find much to fault with it. I am going to say though that you should try using a wider range of Vocab, it helps. ^w^