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PeacefulOni

PeacefulOni

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I'm a newer writer that's mainly done short stories in my past. Hoping to improve my writing and explore some ideas I've had.

2020-08-31 JoinedUnited States
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    PeacefulOni6 years ago
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    The idea of the story is pretty interesting, although it's not the usual genre I go into. The writing seems well-done no noticable mistakes if any. It's clear the author has done her research on both Russia and India, the description of the culture, terms, and structures being my personal favorite parts of the story so far. Overall a strong 4 stars.

The Shadow in the Sunlight

"The light would never work with the dark. The existence of one brings pain to the other." The world is torn in two between two clashing empires. All who surround them must choose their side. The light, righteous beings of hope trying to destroy the devils that walk the land. The dark, barbaric monsters trying to bring the land into chaos. The answer seems clear, but is it as simple as it seems? Both believe themselves right... Both believe the other evil... Time is running out. ......................... New chapters on Sundays (Times will currently be more delayed) Cover art credit: https://www.instagram.com/hijonkhijonk/ Disclaimer: Since this is an early draft of the book, the story contents [chapters, chapter order, character paths, etc.] are subject to change.

PeacefulOni · Fantasy
6 Chs