Jeremy_Parkhurst
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Jeremy_Parkhurst2mthReplied to NeoteraEddena was a twenty-nine-year-old looking beautiful unmarried woman. She had big plump breasts, white skin, slender legs, and a slim waist. Kadyn saw her beautiful, watery brown eyes and felt his heart raced. If he had to give her praise, he would say a single sentence: 'a dream of every teenager.' Kadyn knew little about her as she rented the neighbourhood only a few months ago and talked little about her personal details with anyone.Â- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrCommentedThe air that he pulled toward him was a strange manipulation that Ventus knew well. In a burst of wind elemental mana and Walker's voice, a single word roared out. "PEACE!" This demand was a combination of wind elemental mana and dragon's intimidation.Â
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrReplied to micha4flame
I think the spelling is correct. considering he ended the thought talking about his daughter specifically. i mean Hector technically is not Edward's blood so is not an heir.
Rather than that, Billy was wondering if it was fine to let his kids follow the same path as them. It was rather dangerous, after all. He had talked with Edward about the possibility of one of his kids, possibly Christina taking his post one day, but in the end, that choice will be ultimately hers. - Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrPosted
â˘â˘â˘THIS IS JUST MY OPINION AND I AM⢠â˘â˘LEAVING MY MOST HONEST⢠â˘â˘REVIEW FOR THE AUTHOR TO TAKE⢠â˘â˘CONSTRUCTIVELY AND ACHIEVE THE⢠â˘â˘BEST THEY CANâ˘â˘â˘â˘â˘ so far to, where I've read, it's not terrible. the biggest flaw I see is with character development. like a skipping record the MC progresses and ends where he started. the world is gritty and realistic and there is beauty in the world building. the development of the story becomes stale only due to the fact of the MC's development. I have found few to no grammar mistakes which is refreshing on this site.
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrCommented"HAAAAH! DIE! DIE! DIE!" Ollen shouted and then made dozens of Fireballs appear around him before firing them toward Billy.
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrCommentedWithout wasting time, Billy made sure to level up that skill up to ten at least and then used it on his friends, just to be safe. The extra effect was really something else, after all. In any case, Billy thought of making the spell level up a bit more, but then he saw a sudden flash of light in the north. He didn't know what, but he knew that something big had happened⌠Eventually, Billy and the others saw some creatures flying toward the temple city⌠and Billy didn't like what he sawâŚ
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrCommentedWhile Billy was moving backward, wondering how come Svan managed to increase his speed that much and attack him three times before he could do anything, Svan charged again. He was capitalizing the momentum to the point where he even began to use his left arm as well. At that rate, it seemed that he began to punch as fast as Star PlatinumâŚ
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrCommentedBilly charged again, and this time he used Fierce Aura. His speed increased, and thanks to that, Svan barely could see the strikes added with the power of Quick Spear. Still, Svan managed to block strikes because Billy was aiming at his chest with every single strike. Svan began to be pushed away, and he couldn't do a single thing because even the numerous attacks had a lot of weight behind them. Svan also used Fierce Aura without any other choice, but he didn't end there. His brown skin began to turn red, and Billy could almost see the blood pumping in his veins a lot faster than before. His power increased, and he stopped being pushed backward. Thanks to that, Billy wasn't so sure if he could defeat him.
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrCommented"Aye, sir," Billy said and then looked around for a second.
- Jeremy_Parkhurst1yrReplied to RuneExp
I would say it's a decent boon to gain horses, that could thus be used against their enemy, but there is no knowing whether or not anyone on their side has any experience riding a horse. never mind fighting on one.
"Well, we were facing cavalry with infantrymen. We fought well despite that," Billy said. "The only problem is the fact that the enemies think that they can afford to lose some men now. They aren't planning to send any of their captains yet, so they won't lose morale for quite a while." - Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommentedThe first glance was astonishment then immediate love. There was just something in the little baby's eyes that said it had found its home. The high priest couldn't believe how fast she had stopped crying and cuddled in to his arms to sleep the rest of the night away. At that moment a single name he had long since forgotten resurfaced. The name of his mother, Alice.
- Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommented"We will be more careful. My partner agrees that nothing has touched this space for a while, but look at the walls. Whatever was here obviously has left its mark." The marks that Su referred to were cuts in the sturdy carved walls. They were clearly left by things that were able to cut in to dirt and stone easily. On top of that, it seemed that they had cut up the murals for some unknown reason.
- Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommentedCh 1180 1180. Glowing Daisies
- Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommentedCh 313 313. Brains For Brawn
- Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommentedCh 573 573. Earth And Fire
- Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommented
welp. i think the author is either from newengland or heard the phrase "wicked cool" and rolled with it
"That's wicked cool. What about you Art? How is your gear?" Art's face dropped, he had a scrunched up face. - Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrCommented
shameless but brilliant!!đ
After forcing themselves away from this store window they were again distracted. "Isn't that the famous author that released their novel Master of None? I heard that his main character could do anything and even survived an elf kingdom jail." Art surprised both of them by running up and immediately buying the latest copy of the novel and having it signed. He came back with his bag and a huge smile on his face. "Don't worry, I have all the other books at home, you can borrow them later." - Jeremy_Parkhurst2yrReplied to halloween20
ah.. a person of culture i see...
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