Working on it still. Just going to say loose ends will be tied.

I'm writing reading 4 chapters and have to say I have a hard time putting it down. I love the story, humor, and characters so far. Great read to pass time or simply to have something to read. Sidenote: I see what you mean about spacing sentences. Going to try it with latest chapter of my book.

All Hail King Rusty!

I'm definitely getting a Lobo vibe xD

Uh Oh you got some explaining to do lol

I like the start and the characterization

couldn't help but chuckle at this part, in a good way. reminds me a little of someone I know

thanks for the review

Thanks for the review and advice. Should I possibly space it like every two sentences or how would u recommend?

The story is interesting and adds a twist to the ordinary VR game genre that usually is sometimes generic. I only read the first two chapters but find the story interesting so far. Keep up the good work!

Awesome start!

I love the twist you have imagined and I can't wait to continue reading. Anyway, I would possibly try to figure out a way to break this paragraph into seperate ones. Kinda makes the flow of the story differ but not by much.

Thank you for the review

Though I just read the first chapter, I just love the attitude of the Mistress. Continue the good work.