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weeeeeeeee5dCommentedBut can they put up a fight against the godly G-rank charm?
He immediately grabbed the attention of the room with his presence. With looks that put even the best-looking actor to shame, he became the focal point of everyone's gaze.- weeeeeeeee15dCommented
"as if" true mc vibes right there, he even has the developed 6th sense
- Jan and Louise's rivalry began when Jan first joined the Prep Academy for Heroes. He accidentally bumped into Valencia, and Louise defended her fiercely. Thanks to Valencia's intervention, a fight was narrowly avoided, but ever since then, Louise has harboured a strong hate for Jan as he was way too good at everything as if he was reincarnated from another world. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
But this one leans more towards effort.
In contrast, Louise was the heir to the weapon known as the Flaming Terror. Blessed with the purest fire attribute and exceptional physical strength, he never missed a day of training or study in his life. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
Blessed by the gods, I suppose.
While Jan possessed an adaptive ability greater than any other person on Earth, allowing him to learn things with a single glance, he was perfect in every way. His mana reserves seemed bottomless, and his swordsmanship matched that of the sword saints. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
i doubt the " at the beginning should be there...?
"I grabbed the wrist of the hand that was holding me with my right hand and gave Louise a serious look. 'Let go, Louise,' I said as I began applying pressure slowly. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
and the rival, too
Suddenly, a force pushed me back, and I found myself eye-to-eye with someone who I didn't quite understand—Louise De Valerion. He and his lackeys stared at me with an intimidating intent. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
valencia? the gf in the original novel?
In the middle of the crowd, I spotted the friends I made at Heroes Prep Academy—Camilia, Valencia, Bazz, and Lyra. Excitement welled up within me, and I shouted, "Yo, guys!" waving my hands through the bustling crowd. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
might be missing a comma and "as" (connector) here, too. "her voice shaky but sincere, as she bowed her head in thanks." (?)
"Thank you so much for helping me," her voice shaky but sincere she bowed her head in thanks. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
and furfill? (i might be tripping here)
The thugs were crying in pain and I couldn't help but let out a bit of laughter. I wasn't a hero, but I did fulfil a quest. - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
shouldnt it be leveled?
[Fighting Skill Increased: Quick Shot levelled up! Grade 10 -> Grade 9 - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
is the comma in "Sure!," needed? (afaik, shouldnt be, tho im not sure)
[Sure!, Here you go, Mr. Axel!] - weeeeeeeee15dCommented
Wow, polite
[The System is kindly asking you to choose 3 abilities out of the 5 please Mr Axel :D ] - weeeeeeeee15dReplied to weeeeeeeeeCh 271 Not good enough
- weeeeeeeee19dCommentedCh 4 Epilogue — The Author's POV
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That book... that was Kevin's.
'The Luminescent Swordman.' - weeeeeeeee19dCommented
YESSSSS
"...but I guess mine does," I muttered, pursing my lips. "My efforts didn't betray me." - weeeeeeeee19dCommented
heh, this guy
"It's funny how the quote I once used to despise turned out to be the very quote that I couldn't agree more with. Could this be character development?" - weeeeeeeee19dCommented
The callback.
'Efforts never betray you.' - weeeeeeeee19dCommented
huh. i thought he had died...
"Gilbert?"