why do I feel a plot twist coming with a new story line. I like where this is going. rotflmao uncle imortuii...?

why do I have a feeling galin becomes immartui?

I second that notion

how much to get 20 more chapters?

wonder who has better absolute blood control quin or alucard from hellsing. would be sweet to see quin use blood controll to make demon dog hounds from blood that just devour all the living.

like the story. pls don't succumb to posting his stats every chapter, it gets old.

Love this book. I greatly admire this authors style. I wonder if he could do a dark elf rouge. there has not been a good one in a while.

i would pay 30 if he would do a mass release.

no doubt. I bet we start seeing celestials teaming up very soon.

ok showing his stats all the time are getting old.

ok it was short and sweet. but I'm expecting something good on the next. people ask how I became a master. I always say because I failed a million times more than you tried. you got my votes.

yeah this ending sucked. loved the story. the climax was way to close to the ending. this one should have taken a lot longer to unfold.. dialogue was great, as well as character mapping. however. you go from middle of the story at 225, to the end at 288. don't be scared.

nicely planned out. great editing but progressing way to fast .keep it going. next he should explore the edge of the world and discover something amazing but hard, before he progresses. maybe become a captive of some alien civilization before he breaks free and beats the life out of the kings to recruit them to fight something bigger

fave chapter so far. I'm really surprised by this book I just started last week.

love this book with the way the author is developing the character I can't wait to see what the main character is capable of. to start from such heights I can't wait to see what he is capable of. the story line is well developed and keeps the reader wanting more. I'm waiting for more protagonist, which are starting to show. with the character development I love it. it's no scott card, or isaac asimov, but more of a Jim butcher meets lee child. I hope that they give this saga a chance. it could very easily rival super gene or vampire system if the authors keeps up the originality and authenticity. praying for this book because I'm excited reading this book.

I'm disappointed how short these chapters are getting.

I hope manatee ends up as xie fies apprentice or Friend

this is bs. I've already bought privelidges on 4 other books. I need a life.

do I hear face slaps for bj's in the future?

they should cultivate america into the plot instead of china when they translate it. they would get alot more readers.