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what other people say and, you can also add like Redux or some other way of saying "THIS IS A RETELLING" so people know this is the OG (still good) one and the other one is the Preem stuff
both are good, personally i'd keep this one and release an updated story as it's own thing since both are good :)
and so it begins (again)
love the story though :)
i feel like he should figure out domain (with the lore drop sure-hit) quite a lot sooner since that's what most people think of when they see hakari, yk?
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