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tmack55009mthCommentedCh 151 She Found A Pretty Mate At New Year Festival.- tmack55009mthCommented
I thought she was texting Liam the other night on the balcony?
"Oh my god, thanks a lot, I actually needed one to help make this place less boring for me" Ariel accepted the smart phone from Blair and started checking it out. It's one cool phone. - tmack55009mthCommented
I’m not quite sure how fair it is that we pay a certain amount of coins depending on the number of words in a chapter, but the first 2-3 paragraphs in almost all of these chapters are simply repeated from the end of the previous chapter.
Ch 66 A Very Dangerous Deal With The Devil. - tmack55009mthCommentedCh 220 Back to where it all began
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I think I may have missed who Benjam is. Can someone pleas help me out?
"I know, but we have to try. You have to try to avenge Benjamin," he told her. - tmack55001yrReplied to Itsy_Bitsy
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"Katrina, do it now." Desmond felt like he was the only one seeing the gravity of the situation they were in. The duke for some reason was smitten by Alessandra which meant they could not trouble his daughter or Edgar might truly kill them - tmack55001yrCommented
Women?
"Ahhh, I'm not dying am I?" Nicholas muttered to himself as his stallion snorted at him. "Yes, I've seen women before this. I'm not a hermit or anything so why am I… like this right now?" - tmack55002yrCommented
I LOVE how you named the queen after her. That is an amazing way to show how truly grateful you are to your readers. I am obsessed with this book and I am beyond impressed by our dear author's writing skills. I have made it a point to read EVERY single one of her stories and i have never been disappointed <3
This chapter is dedicated to the lovely Maude Fluckiger for gifting a spacecraft and castle and many other gifts to this book today. I have run out of words to thank you, but I hope you know how much I am grateful and appreciate your support. xx - tmack55003yrCommented
Do? or don't?
"Yes, on the same note I do like that bitch," the white witcher added. - tmack55003yrPosted
The writing style and story line are both spectacular. The grammar (i.e. run on sentences, muspelled words, and missing words) is lacking, and the errors are so frequent that it becomes extremely frustrating for the reader. The content Is fantastic and it’s hard to put it down, so all in all its a wonderful story.
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I should add, I’m only in the beginning few chapters of this book so I’m sure their age will become more clear to me shortly.
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