Except, he didn't invent the lightbulb, his version of the lightbulb was just better. And he was good at patents and business as well.

This is by word for word copy of "A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09" from fanfiction . net. Atleast the first 2 chapters, so I have no hope for the rest of this.

Oppai~

Maybe it's wrong of me to think like this, but when I read here on Webnovel, a part of the experience is reading the comments on the chapter. I have nothing against authors being active there, but when I feel out of the loop when reading, wondering why the main character is acting like a perverted lunatic, and all your response is "read Void and Primordial darkness","you need more indepth knowledge" and "read to chapter X" I don't feel like it's worth it to read more. I have no clue what Void and Primordial darkness is, my knowledge of Marvel is perhaps average, while my DC is below average. Usually when I'm reading fanfics, I just need the base knowledge to enjoy myself and when something new pops up it's usually explained so regular fans learn the how's and why's. But here, you gave me nothing the first 8 chapters and just told us to read that and that before this or endure. When I'm not enjoying myself I usually try to endure or quit. I guess this wasn't for me, as this fanfiction is more targeted against those who've read what you just mentioned. I would recommend to try to understand that not everyone have read or have all the required knowledge to understand/enjoy this fanfiction, and by responding to these "toxic" critics by being toxic back them doesn't paint a very good picture to the average fan of the source material. And if their critique is unfounded even in their limited view, I'll recommend to just ignore them, because if you keep responding to trolls it will only feed them. That was my opinion of this situation. Just one opinion, and it seems like there are plenty of people that enjoy this and your other works. I've never written anything for anyone here to read so I can't say how it feels like to have people criticize my work in a way I would feel unjustified. Well anyway, I've spent more time responding to you than reading this fanfic. I guess there's a joke in that somewhere.

Well sorry if my review seemed a little vague with "mc is stupid". I'm not sure why you're accusing me of spamming when I haven't commented on any of your novels, and this is my first review of any of your works. You act as if every simple critic of your character Alex Wilson as a personal insult to you. My vague critic just sums up my limited experience with the MC. Didn't help that you wrote that his personality will change randomly in a couple of chapters when my opinion of him already being low at that point and it just sounding like an excuse, and when someone pointed that out, you treated him like and idiot. I just got to chapter 9 before I gave up and made this review. Funny how you want me to find these people that I accuse you of treating like idiots when you at the same time, treat me like an idiot and say that you don't give a fk. It seems like you are proving myself here.

The mc is stupid and the author's excuses makes it worse. doesn't help either that the author is very defensive in the comments and treats every critic as idiots.

Mc thinks only with his d**k and have psychopathic thoughts about r*pe and murder, and later on acts upon some of them. The author have made the mc pathetic in his actions and it does make me lose hope in humanity when reading some of the comments who would want mindcontrol powers to r*pe, or other stuff like many wanting Bell dead for simply being in the way for Hestia and/or Ais, which does show how pathetic some of the readers are.

Great story so far, I like where this is going! Though I wonder who the sixth member will be. Would be funny if it was one of the goddesses.

It's isn't a racial slur... If a pureblood uses a word like muggle to someone in a demeaning way doesn't make the word muggle bad, that's like a rich person insulting a taxidriver by calling him a taxidriver... That doesn't make the word taxidriver a demeaning word by any means. And by your definition, no-maj would also be racist in the USA. So could you please use the correct term when in the UK.

How's saying muggle racist? Mud-blood is the racist word you're looking for....

Are you skipping chapters or "skipping" around happily? There's a difference.

I think he/she meant blonde hair.

Giving it a good rating because of the potential I see in it. .................................................. Let's hope it doesn't get dropped like many others I've read.

Author, please... 1-Star Silver Rank is 1000, not 600. 2-Star Silver Rank is 2000 and so on.

I'm sorry but I had to give up reading this as I've seen increasingly that the novel doesn't carry out its description. The DC part of it is pretty much non-existent (except some brief appearances) and focuses solely on Michael and Samuel/Lucifer. Even though the author warned in advance of his ONE GOD ramblings it still doesn't excuse the bias that you'll feel from the author, defending God and Michael's actions (or inactions) like a zealot in the form of Michael, like a self-insert, wish fulfillment, as if the author himself just wrote this novel to try and justify God's actions/inactions. To much time is spent on preaching about God from Michael that you would be forced to try, REALLY hard not to try and find the author's hidden agenda behind all of this. I wouldn't really care if it was Gabriel only, but Michael IS the main character, so it's hard not to come to the conclusion that this is the author's opinion which bleed into the novel. Later on Michael and Gabriel do "indeed" question and "criticize" God. I put it in citations because they pretty much just go back into loving him again like it was a trial or something, which is debatable. It's funny that the author is quite active in the comments defending God and Michael, but never responds to the classics like; "If god is omnipotent and all-knowing, why do God test them?", "Why's Noah's Ark necessary if it would just go back to the usual later on? God should've known that right?". Well, that's all. Maybe it's because I'm an Atheist and I get triggered when som people preach about God and how all of creation are his objects and doesn't deserve to exist and should repent if it doesn't coincide with his thoughts and plans. And praying in church automatically makes you the good guy.

Wasn't there a 6% cut from the auction?