Ferasight
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Ferasight7dReplied to Ferasightand ued I took march off writing
Sig: the tower is not fair in the first place Headen should've explained this to you there is no law outside what the test administrator sets so I'm sorry this is normal. Blame it on your team if you're that fucking weak.- Ferasight7dReplied to Ronald_Lawhorne
probably cause it's really bad
Sig: the tower is not fair in the first place Headen should've explained this to you there is no law outside what the test administrator sets so I'm sorry this is normal. Blame it on your team if you're that fucking weak. - Ferasight7dReplied to BLITZ2Ch 486 Avalon
- Ferasight25dReplied to Orixo7
ya, I know. I've never been good with punctuation. That's why the three sentence paragraph method is a heavy crutch I use
[Zombie Soul This is the Soul of a basic Zombie This Currency Can be used to buy soldiers supplies and with more advanced Graveyards Vehicles This item is gained from the Zombie Converter.] - Ferasight25dReplied to reaper_of_lewdsect
I didn't even know that existed at the point I was writing that, and even then, i only read like 3 chapters, then it got boring
(Headen is old and well aware of what a chaotic entity look like though Sig is not a chaotic entity his soul is bound to the Necronomicon and is unaware of his other 2 wishes Unrestrained mind and infinity as such Headen was already on alert with Sig why because a chaos aura can not be completely hidden no matter how you try once something is tainted by the MC it will lose all relative to normal. And likely go insane exception being his women yes women he has multiple even if he doesn't want to he will sadly make a girl fall for him why because sometimes I manipulate characters personality to go with my PLot it's fanfic no it's not gonna be some bullshit 100 plus women fuck that too many to count and way too many names I do not have but it gonna be subtler though Endorsi might be an exception as she was already in love with bam by like comic chapter 150 was it I don't remember rereading it now.) - Ferasight2mthReplied to Dropletcloud
ah no I'm having a seizure reading the same string of chapters over and over again
Sig'THANK FUCKING GOD IT's NOT A WRITTEN TEST JUST LIKE THE WEBCOMIC' - Ferasight2mthReplied to JudgeFate_18Ch 22 Wasting
- Ferasight2mthReplied to No_Internet_2853
this is a fan fiction spoilers are to be expected even for the plot adjustments made.
(trying as best as possible not to kill her right fucking here because she is a plot device she will vanish later.) - Ferasight3mthReplied to zak_moe_5413
ah, well, the story flows. It's actually pretty fine. it's just the writing so bad it makes it confusing. Though I will admit that when I was that amateur, I tended to skip over a great chunk of story bits to get to the juicy action. I was so confident in writing at the time. As for repairing it, the story from that point the beginning to now is so vastly different in quality that even I, as the author, can't figure out what i was thinking. sorry about the lack of quality, and I apologize if my past selves writing give you a headache so to summarize, the entire book beginning is completely unsalvagable because I don't remember what I was thinking when I wrote it.
- Ferasight3mthReplied to Daoist452371
no it sucks because one I don't do edits to prior chapters making it hard to even get to the chapter with proper English 2 it's a dumpster fire of ideas somewhat following the plot of tog and the characters are all as flimsy here as paper instead of being well developed since I was compressing stuff just to get through.
"Sig Grab the Item from it as it finishes getting reel in." - Ferasight3mthReplied to random_re124
you'll hate him later in the book trust me
Sig:... not really if I was insulting anybody it would be Zahard He quite the tyrant yet he was to stupid to realize when his own love interested was infatuated with V - Ferasight3mthReplied to Project_Traveler
no, just human stupidity and greed the warp isn't involved outside of the Warhammer universe human corrupt the ground with terrible machinery that polite everything and their sadistic tortures and inhumane experimentation.
-A long time ago with this amount of corruption it's even mutated the area human. Live in it's almost like a goddam chaos entity decided to amplify the sins of man to extreme degrees. - - Ferasight4mthReplied to Ferasight
it Erased half my spaces I really don't like this new way web novel does comments.
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