valifor69
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valifor691yrCommentedCh 52 Advance Toward the Main Settlement- valifor691yrPosted
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this whole paragraph is redundant
Marcus spent a great amount of time lamenting about his future decision on whether to continue staying balanced with his stats or pushing everything he has into magic. - valifor692yrCommentedCh 2351 Breaking the Door
- valifor692yrCommentedCh 2231 The Crisis is Close
- valifor692yrCommentedCh 638 The return
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earlier when he evolved you stated his recovery rate went up so it should no longer be this low
This paragraph has been deleted. - valifor693yrCommentedCh 40 A New Target
- valifor693yrCommentedCh 29 CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE : THE LABYRINTH
- valifor693yrCommentedCh 547 A Burnt Shelter
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remove one of the unable to
As this was said, all of these students turned silent. For a few moments, they were unable to unable to process this plan. - valifor693yrCommented
remove the "the" in the section slower than (the) that of the car
The Wind Element’s skill seems good. This movement speed was not any slower than the that of a car. It’s just Zhang Xiaohou hasn’t met the standards; thus, he didn’t know how to pull over and stop. - valifor693yrCommented
no need for 2 was
The grass was was swaying wildly and the dirt particles were flying everywhere. The girls covered and held their skirts down as they let out astonished cries.