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Also Author, please make the story longer. Just makes sense from the pacing of the story. With the third cataclysm in 5 years it just doesn't make sense to end the novel in less than 100 chapters. You've written 500 chapters leading to around 5 years for the characters. So like...changing the pacing of the novel would really feel like it would be rushed. (I dont mind for more filler chapters and arcs to make up Ren training for the third cataclysm)

So yeah, I'm really hoping for Amanda × Melissa for Ren. Emma is for Kevin 100%. Jin...I know his personality kinda fits Melissa more if that's what your going for author but like...nah, Melissa is another gem for Ren lol. Not saying Jin doesn't need any romance but his extremely cold character really just seems he really doesn't need one and o ly cares about training. The man is probably more obsessed with catching up to Ren than anything right now. I also know Melissa is also that type except she's a research fanatic. Just judging from the amount of screentime she had with the mc compared to Jin. It really makes alot more sense if she also ends up with Ren instead of Jin.

You're probably not going to see this since I'm writing this so late but man. If you decide for a harem put Melissa in the mix. Obviously Amanda is the number one candidate right now; however, Idk why but I enjoyed Melissa and Rens bickering almost to the point where they seem like a old married couple. Their conversations is so unique compared to how Ren talks with other characters. Tbh Melissa is really a loose cannon as she comes off as if she hates his guts but really doesn't. With her venomous personality it would really be fun to watch how she would get closer to Ren with her personality as well as how Melissa would handle it etc. But since this is coming from when the story is already 500 chapters deep I don't know if author has any plans for her or not.

If the guys good looking common sense for people can go out the window. Though, only if there good looking. Dunno if the mc is or not yet.

if you have the ability to pick up context clues from the last chapter his death will obviously be due to that drink his crush gave to him lol

Sometimes being a disappointment will bring more trouble lol. Better to just be average or a little above to live peacefully.

mood.

that's good the author put a limit to the skill as I dont want the mc to be overly reliant on the skill. Still want to see that character growth!

I like how the author is putting good character development for the side character too d:

For those confused it's just a 6v6 but its split into 3 matches. Each match they can choose to put 1-3 of their members to fight in that match. Thus emphasizing more strategy in the game.