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kane is now my new favorite character
where is the tiger at I can't find it
you think being manhandled by two women counts as being masculine
It also multiplied hers by 5 so that didn't really make sense and since she got of peices of his talent that in come sense should have weakened him also any one who ever watch naruto should know about the human path and it ability to read memories of the soul so following the laws of naurto they shoulds have some of each others memories but they dont if you just ignore the laws of the story of the fan fic with out any sound reason then it just another trash story by someone who obviously don't naurto
the more I think about your soul theory the more flawed it seems like if piece of his soul that had his talent went to her wouldn't that mean his talents weaken and since he did getting paper release wouldn't that make her the only one who benfits
Hey author I don't want to tell you how to right a book but couldn't you make battle energy a little more special like it just fell like a not important concept the way you write you could've also add attributes to it or make it that each battle energy grant a special ability
Sorry to here that bro😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰