Aevitas

Shameless self-review. I hope to write an interesting story that you all will enjoy. If you want to see more then drop a review or a collection <3

It is an interesting mystery novel. I am curious to see in the future if Quasar actually saw god or is just schizophrenic. Will he escape from the psych ward he is in, or will he be released for some reason? Looking forward to more chapters

Shameless first review. I hope to have fun with this novel, so I hope everyone reading will have fun as well <3

I have only read 9 chapters, I could not force myself to read any further. This review won't reflect the series as a whole, just what I could stomach. The translation quality is barely above machine translation level, making it very jarring to read Even if somehow you look past the translation, the framing of all the scenes is awful. Things happen with no explanation, perspectives shift out of nowhere, and it goes back and forth between present and past tense constantly. It is really hard to concentrate on the story. That leads to the final point, the story. The story is nothing special, pretty much just cookie-cutter cliche Chinese characters with as much depth as a speed bump. Cliches aren’t bad, and are often enjoyable, but not when cliches are literally every part of the story. Final statement: Don’t bother reading unless you have nothing better to do, and even then think twice.

It has an interesting premise, but to be honest, is kind of boring. Up till chapter 5 at least not much happens. The dialogue comes off to me as a little bit cringey, and it made it hard to read.

Steven universe is cool, hope your work does well.

Thanks for the catch, i mistyped it and grammarly didnt correct me because it was a real word.

I recommend using grammarly, its free and helps a lot. It catches all the mistakes for you.

Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there it was really well written. It has a story I find interesting and I hope it does well.

Your comment gives me energy <3