seric1994
I am an aspiring writer currently working on "The Plague of Light" here on Webnovel!
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The story seemed like it had a lot of potential. My only real issue was that dialogue began each paragraph and there was more telling than showing. I enjoyed the content though, you could see where the story was going and it felt fun, and each character felt thought out. SO, if there were any advice to give, it would be to work on structure and show vs. tell.