Kaede8888
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☾ | "The little piggies were not to be disturbed—"
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Kaede88882yrCommentedI like how you used action words like "DRMMMM" and "BOOM" in your story.
DRMMMMM! It immediately dug into the ground and started to tunnel beneath a nearby farm. Dr. Intelligent could see a little bump on the ground zooming along through the camera on his computer. Dirt was flying by and the machine was still accelerating. The beast of a machine was fast, and hard to notice, he thought. Perfect.- Kaede88882yrCommented
It's very dramatic. I look forward to your next chapter!
"Then let's begin the game of death." - Kaede88882yrCommented
The names of your characters are pretty unique, like X and K.
"He has a son, X. You are aware, yes?" - Kaede88882yrCommented
Nice way of introducing the character :)
I answered every question calmly, "My name is Annie Never, my parents' names are Jacob and Jessica, I have a brother named Michael and a dog called Loaf."