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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

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Yes she did explain but you show nothing about the mc in the first chapter no charecter no emotion beside getting pecked on the cheek that’s all i got i have no idea what our mc is like. Like i could probly learn more if i read more but know that he is in a perrage which i already don’t like pls explain his charecter. Yes he is looking for information but you should explain it a bit more

My god this is the best story i have read in a while. This new chapter gave me goosebumps

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