Renegade_Universal
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Shinzou wo Sasageyo!
Eren Jaeger!
If you have a good idea that you would like to see implemented, do not hesitate to comment wherever you want. The same goes for questions. I'll explain it a little better: If you imagine perchance a spell that you would like to see explained by physics (chemistry/math/biology), such as the spell "Acid Rain", you ought to comment that you want to see it, and I shall bring an expert's (not mine) view on how it could be done (and its limitations). Alternatively, you could say: "It would be cool to see the villain using a spell like 'Binding Rope' on the heroine...", and I can see what I can do for you... If you have doubts about a physics/math/chemistry/biology concept, you can also write anywhere, and I shall try to implement it in the novel with appropriate explanations and into spells (if applicable). For instance, if you say: "I don't understand black holes at, Mr. Author!", I shall try my best to bring you an appropriate explanation, as well as one or more spells connected to that concept. In this case, perhaps the spells "Black Hole" (this one is pretty extreme, a real black hole would completely destroy the planet, most likely), "Singularity", "Space Distortion", "Time Dilation", "Schwarzschild's Compression", "Event Horizon", etc. Furthermore, you could also ask for some more philosophical questions, political questions, historical questions, questions regarding the world of JPM, and I'll answer in the story or through your comment. Keep in mind that whatever you ask for may change the story progression. Thanks for reading, and I hope you learn a lot.
Bro?! Prototype Archaic on Noelle??????? Whiteblind where??
Ayo hahah
Yup
Hey, author here. I am... speechless... with your comment. Just, wow. As you could tell, I am an amateur autor. This was just my second attempt at writing a story, and I honestly was just writing for fun. I tried to make everything as realistic and connected as I could, but it really is a tough job haha. Seriously, don't ever underestimate how difficult writing can be. I greatly appreciate your comment, Mr. Library. I thought this work was but a ridiculous attempt at professional story-telling, given the poor reactions and reviews, but I'm glad I managed to get something through to you (and some several others too). So thank you for reading it and leaving a review. As for why I dropped it, simply a matter of destiny, to put it bluntly. Although from time to time I wish I had the available time to come back and write some more. I find that quite unlikely to happen, but if it does, it is mainly because of comments like yours, so don't stop them from coming hahaha. After months away, I finally felt the desire to write something new. Or rather, to add onto my ever-growing list of stories to write in the future. Don't know what's going to happen next, but I hope fate permits our next encounter soon. Best regards, Bruno V.
Ive heard period migraine is much worse than a normal one
Oh don’t worry. Consider it an investment
Though I am truly sorry I have failed to make the story super catchy from the start, I will still hold onto my belief that it can amount to greatness in the not so distant future. I have personally witnessed how a useless MC developed to become the Demon King little by little (TGC), so I trust the slow-pacing my story has had so far. And if anyone else reads this, the "blandness" is about to end (at most like 5-6 chapters more I think).
About what, exactly?
Actually, the common Fatui enemies don't have Delusions, their abilities come from the weapons they carry. The mages are different though, according to the wiki, as well as the maiden and the agent.