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Renegade_Universal

Renegade_Universal

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New author, old reader.

2020-08-26 JoinedBrazil
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1mth
    Commented

    Shinzou wo Sasageyo!

    The three of them had a determined look as they saluted simultaneously, putting their right hand on their left chest, a sign that they would give her heart to me if they needed to.
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    Sins Paradise: Domination System
    Fantasy · MarudameOssan
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal2mth
    Commented

    Eren Jaeger!

    "I want... to be... free."
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    Abyssal Lord of the Magi World
    Fantasy · Redsunworld
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal3mth
    Posted

    If you have a good idea that you would like to see implemented, do not hesitate to comment wherever you want. The same goes for questions. I'll explain it a little better: If you imagine perchance a spell that you would like to see explained by physics (chemistry/math/biology), such as the spell "Acid Rain", you ought to comment that you want to see it, and I shall bring an expert's (not mine) view on how it could be done (and its limitations). Alternatively, you could say: "It would be cool to see the villain using a spell like 'Binding Rope' on the heroine...", and I can see what I can do for you... If you have doubts about a physics/math/chemistry/biology concept, you can also write anywhere, and I shall try to implement it in the novel with appropriate explanations and into spells (if applicable). For instance, if you say: "I don't understand black holes at, Mr. Author!", I shall try my best to bring you an appropriate explanation, as well as one or more spells connected to that concept. In this case, perhaps the spells "Black Hole" (this one is pretty extreme, a real black hole would completely destroy the planet, most likely), "Singularity", "Space Distortion", "Time Dilation", "Schwarzschild's Compression", "Event Horizon", etc. Furthermore, you could also ask for some more philosophical questions, political questions, historical questions, questions regarding the world of JPM, and I'll answer in the story or through your comment. Keep in mind that whatever you ask for may change the story progression. Thanks for reading, and I hope you learn a lot.

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    Journal of Physics and Math for the Aspiring Magician
    Fantasy · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to X1AutumnLeaf

    It isn't dropped. Just think of it as a Dehya-main's strike. I need time to regain my hope in Genshin.

    Ch 69 The Mask
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to David_Drake

    What the-

    Ch 65 Alone Again
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to X1AutumnLeaf

    Yep. I decided to vary on the chapter length a little, for better cliffhanger effect.

    Ch 64 Abandoned
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Father_Kotomine

    Bro?! Prototype Archaic on Noelle??????? Whiteblind where??

    'Ohhh! I love Noelle mains!'
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to X1AutumnLeaf

    I felt that, thanks bud

    Ch 52 Lightning Bolt
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Redald

    I missed you, Redald-dono~

    Ch 48 No Such Thing as a Free Lunch
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to LackyAs

    Ayo hahah

    Unfortunately for him, Noelle was caught in a chance combo of the two enemies, and ended up dead on the ground. Sai was in utter shock.
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Mobius_5trip

    Yup

    Although everything he said was logical, it wasn't true. According to the game, she was an extremely busy person, Ningguang had more things to do than to go after a mere aspiring knight. Her secretary and Keqing aside, who else could have stopped someone's teleportation? More importantly, Rex Lapis wasn't actually dead, so their troops were only putting up a show of investigating.
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Forbidden_Library

    Thank you very much! I also would like to thank you for your recommendations, I forgot to mention it before hehe

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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Forbidden_Library

    Hey, author here. I am... speechless... with your comment. Just, wow. As you could tell, I am an amateur autor. This was just my second attempt at writing a story, and I honestly was just writing for fun. I tried to make everything as realistic and connected as I could, but it really is a tough job haha. Seriously, don't ever underestimate how difficult writing can be. I greatly appreciate your comment, Mr. Library. I thought this work was but a ridiculous attempt at professional story-telling, given the poor reactions and reviews, but I'm glad I managed to get something through to you (and some several others too). So thank you for reading it and leaving a review. As for why I dropped it, simply a matter of destiny, to put it bluntly. Although from time to time I wish I had the available time to come back and write some more. I find that quite unlikely to happen, but if it does, it is mainly because of comments like yours, so don't stop them from coming hahaha. After months away, I finally felt the desire to write something new. Or rather, to add onto my ever-growing list of stories to write in the future. Don't know what's going to happen next, but I hope fate permits our next encounter soon. Best regards, Bruno V.

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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to ImmortalVirgin_0980

    Ive heard period migraine is much worse than a normal one

    He immediately felt pain coursing throughout his body and headache the likes of which only a woman's migraine could compare to… but it only lasted a split second before he regained clarity.
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Devout_Wanderer

    Welcome 🤗

    Ch 47 Supercar vs JDM
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Devout_Wanderer

    Dont think you were the first though 😂

    Ch 46 Upcoming War
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Ashlionel

    Oh don’t worry. Consider it an investment

    "Unfortunately, my friend, I have a contractual obligation which forbids me from giving this away." He closed his hand and the Gnosis was gone again. "You were but one day too late."
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to WillowsEcho

    Though I am truly sorry I have failed to make the story super catchy from the start, I will still hold onto my belief that it can amount to greatness in the not so distant future. I have personally witnessed how a useless MC developed to become the Demon King little by little (TGC), so I trust the slow-pacing my story has had so far. And if anyone else reads this, the "blandness" is about to end (at most like 5-6 chapters more I think).

    Ch 45 God of Contracts
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Ashlionel

    About what, exactly?

    "Unfortunately, my friend, I have a contractual obligation which forbids me from giving this away." He closed his hand and the Gnosis was gone again. "You were but one day too late."
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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  • Renegade_Universal
    Renegade_Universal1yr
    Replied to Vivan_Maurya

    Actually, the common Fatui enemies don't have Delusions, their abilities come from the weapons they carry. The mages are different though, according to the wiki, as well as the maiden and the agent.

    "I only know that the Harbingers each possess one. As for any others, I don't know."
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    Summoned as a Genshin Character
    Video Games · Renegade_Universal
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