it's all good

why not just get rid of the chapters when you know they're the wrong ones like at this point this is twice now technically three times because you put one chapter in the wrong spot fix it man

okay the spelling and grammar is beginning to drive me up a wall and the forgetting details it's becoming nerve-wracking at least review these first chapters again I mean I know you're further along in the story but please fix the errors in the beginning

The advantage of his intelligence at this point doesn't he have like a five in intelligence He's basically an idiot fix that because that's not right makes no sense for him low intelligence and yet act like it's a big intelligence it's not at this point he's got like a five in intelligence makes no sense

One time I woke up as a snail and saw the end it creeped me out then I woke up and it was a dream

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awfully bad frfrfr not even worth the time

this is kind of weird these are wizards with magic against a fat whale of a human why you acting like it's so serious and this 3 days of training in this man it's like this man's brain is on crack honest to God please remember this is absolutely ridiculous

it's not terrible but altogether absolutely wretched

oh boy are you in for a treat

okay this is another review so there will be spoilers but I'm on 2034 that's the chapter I'm on right now I've noticed in a couple of these chapters so far especially this one they already got the tears several chapters before and yet it's brought up acting like they didn't do it I don't know if the author isn't paying attention or is simply forgetting what he's writing but this is a serious problem because then it makes the events of the chapters you have where you already have the four tears cuz you already got them for the Golden feather thing in a few chapters beforehand so the author must have forgotten this and then I've noticed every time a new energy or conversion or whatever is added to the system at the end of the chapter one of the characters goes oh to not cause any confusion we're going to call this blah blah blah energy like you don't need to break the fourth wall to tell us that just simply change the name of it and carry on so overall this is okay but it's extremely annoying because the author is literally forgetting what he's putting in his own book

I'm just having a problem with the brothers still fighting back and forth it's honestly a pain it's quite annoying no I'm not going to lie I'm not even at the thousand chapter but I'm getting there but they're still fighting every chance they get like it's a life and death scenario when it started by by one of them grabbing onto the person's leg after the first protagonist died then the death spirit or reaper came to take them and wind up grabbing on to them and being resurrected in another world and yet still continuing to have a petty childlike squabble it's not even cute or funny at this point it's honestly annoying now I'm going to read more obviously I'm going to read all the way to the updates but I'm aiming to see if this changes I may update this comment if it does but if it doesn't it's quite annoying and I don't like the fact that you spend about 500 chapters on a planet and then destroyed it even though you brought it back later on doesn't change the fact that you made a bunch of useless missions and post on things for the system and it absolutely meant nothing it's honestly ridiculous for the two protagonist one was a thousand-year-old death spirit or older either way who had seen countless existences and guided countless souls to the afterlife and then the other one was a 30-year-old person who finally decided they wanted to live right before they died and have emotion and yet the two of them were dragged in and given a second chance and instead of you making them embrace that chance in the first half you made them constantly fight with each other like small children it's absolutely ridiculous they were both adults honest feedback

I think these titles need to be updated correctly cuz it seems like we jump the gun with a titles I mean for me personally I thought we were going to see more about the mechanical ruins I mean you're probably getting there that you're jumping the gun a bit

The damn repeats in the whole chapters this was a good storyline but my God was it awful with the damn repeats if I could give it a zero star I would absolutely wretched

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I like the overall story and the culture that's built into the story it's very nice