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Winter_jade

Winter_jade

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2020-08-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • Winter_jade
    Winter_jade3yr
    Commented

    You go girl! 😄

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    altalt
    The Unfortunate...Or not?
    Fantasy ¡ Scarlett_Witch
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  • Winter_jade
    Winter_jade3yr
    Replied to SANJITHA_SAVITHA

    thanks luv

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    altalt
    Winter's Bound
    Teen ¡ Winter_jade
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  • Winter_jade
    Winter_jade3yr
    Commented

    😂 wth??

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    altalt
    Green Leaf
    Fantasy ¡ Shujinko_Josei
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  • Winter_jade
    Winter_jade3yr
    Replied to SANJITHA_SAVITHA

    thank you so much ❤❤

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    altalt
    Winter's Bound
    Teen ¡ Winter_jade
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  • Winter_jade
    Winter_jade3yr
    Posted

    I just read the first chapter. Maybe you can work on grammar and all, other than that I love the story. You can put in a little work on the pacing and speed of the story. because a lot happened in the first chapter itself. And if you could add something which grabs the reader's attention, that would be great. Overall, I loved this story. Keep going [img=recommend]

    altalt
    THE BEGINNING OF THE END
    Fantasy ¡ Kreizien_Knul
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