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Flaxame2yrCommentedYou meant "Aurora", right?
My sister's name is the first one I learnt, and it is Aroura. She is a short petite girl no more than 5ft 4 and has golden strands of braided hair going over her shoulder going down to her chest area. Just like her father's eyes and her name states, she has a mix between blue and green which becomes progressively more blue as you go towards the iris, with a few lines of green mixed within to finally create a turquoise color near the middle before reaching the iris. Her face is almost always joyful warming anyone's day with just her smile. Her Lucius curves screamed maturity and elegance yet in contrast to her posture and figure, her face was full of naivety and childishness.- Flaxame2yrCommented
I really liked your story, I realized that you are very inspired by Cultivation Online, just be careful not to base yourself too much, it's ok to have other works as inspiration, just be careful not to become a copy, I'll keep following it with pleasure, good luck . ps: sorry for bad english, i'm not native and i'm using the translator
Ch 1 Notice - Flaxame2yrCommented
author, I don't know if you've done this since I'm still in cap 66, but a good way for her to train her muscles and not get 'muscled' would be if she somehow managed to suppress her muscles to look normal even though she was fine. trained, I've seen some novels with female mc do this
"Yes, I know. You too, Eve. I forbid you." Elysia couldn't imagine the body of such a large muscular girl. - Flaxame2yrReplied to NiksElDrago
Author, are you ok?
"𝘕𝘰 𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘴𝘢𝘺... 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘭𝘸𝘢𝘺𝘴 𝘣𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘵𝘭𝘦 𝘣𝘢𝘣𝘺." - Flaxame2yrCommentedCh 64 BSWS CH-64 The Chunin Exams XXXII - Training Completion and Opponent Finalisation
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One of the best novels I've ever read, mc has a very nice personality, and was strong by her own intelligence and willpower, and I found this part of the spirits, gods, etc very original. It was something I always wondered but was never explored in the canon, very good work. ps: you've given up on the story or are you just taking a break, it would really be a shame if such a good story ended like that.